Essay Editing Review

In this quiz, you will need to select the correct answer on your iPad or computer. Are you ready?

• Yes
• No

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CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.8.1C

CCSS.L.K.1D

Is this sentence: "I have two ideas." a good introduction? Why or why not?

• Yes, it includes the opinion.
• Yes, it includes the essay topic.
• No, it does not include the essay topic.
• No, it does not have an opinion.

Please select the best introduction sentence for this essay.

• Here are two ways that Japanese society can help reduce students' stress.

• Japanese high school students experience a lot of stress.
• I think Japanese high school students have too much stress.
• Here are two ways Japanese high school students can reduce their stress.

Where would you put the following sentence?

"These days, many Japanese high school students experience a lot of stress."

• (A)
• (B)
• (C)
• (D)

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CCSS.RI.6.2

CCSS.RI.7.2

CCSS.RL.5.2

CCSS.RL.6.2

CCSS.RL.7.2

"These days, Japanese high school students experience a lot of stress." is an example of...

• Opinion
• General Information
• Reasons
• Conclusion

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CCSS.RI.5.8

CCSS.RI.6.1

CCSS.RI.6.8

CCSS.RI.7.1

CCSS.RL.6.1

Is there any error in this sentence? "High school students in Japan have too much stres."

• "too much" should come after "stres":
  
  "High school students in Japan have stres too much."

• "stres" is misspelled:
  
  "High school students in Japan have too much stress."

• It should be "A high school student":
  
  "A high school student in Japan has too much stres."

• No Change

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CCSS.L.3.1G

Is there any error in this sentence? "This is because they need to rest and sleep more."

• We do not need this sentence.
• "to rest and sleep" should be -ing verbs:
  
  "This is because they need resting and sleeping more."

• It should be combined with the previous sentence:
  
  "High school students in Japan have too much stress because they need to rest and sleep more."

• No Change

Is there any error in this sentence?

"To sleep is important for our health."

• We need to use "what is important is...":
  
  "What is important for our health is to sleep.

• "To sleep" should be an -ing verb:
  
  "Sleeping is important for our health."

• "Our" should be "your":
  
  "To sleep is important for your health."

• No Change

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CCSS.L.8.1A

Is there any error in this sentence? "Student should not use smartphone at night."

• "Student" and "smartphone" should be plural:
  
  "Students should not use smartphones at night."

• We need "to" before use:
  
  "Student should not to use smartphone at night."

• "At night" needs to come at the beginning:
  
  "At night, student should not use smartphone."

• No Change

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

Is there any error in this sentence? "If you use a smartphone at night, it is bad for your health."

• It should be in the conditional tense:
  
  "If you used a smartphone at night, it would be bad for your health."

• It should be -ing verb:
  
  "Using a smartphone at night is bad for your health."

• It is too personal:
  
  "If students use a smartphone at night, it is bad for their health."

• No Change

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.8.1C

CCSS.L.8.3A