Revising: A Picnic in the Park

1. Where is the best place to add this sentence:

2. “My dad arranged our red picnic blanket while we emptied the picnic basket."

• • After sentence 3

• • Before sentence 4

• • After sentence 4

• • After sentence 5

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RL.3.3

CCSS.RL.4.3

CCSS.RL.5.3

1. Which sentence could BEST follow sentence 7?

• • The food was the best we had all month.

• • We all felt relaxed and satisfied after eating.

• • Everyone took a nap right after lunch.

• • My mom always packs the tastiest treats for our picnics.

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RL.3.3

CCSS.RL.4.3

CCSS.RL.5.3

1. What is the MOST effective way to combine sentences 9 and 10?

• • My little brother tried to join in, while he kept throwing the ball in the wrong direction.

• • My little brother tried to join in, while he kept throwing it in the wrong direction.

• • My little brother tried to join, but he kept throwing it in the wrong direction.

• • While my little brother tried to join, he kept throwing it in the wrong direction.

Tags

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

1. In the box provided, combine the ideas in sentences 13 and 14 to create a clear and effective sentence.
   

Tags

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.5.3A

Which sentence could you add to the end of the passage to have a better conclusion?

• I ended up getting a little sunburn that day.

• Having a picnic with my family in the park is one of my favorite ways to spend the day.

• I love picnics, but I wish we had gone to an amusement park instead.

• I'm so glad it didn't rain.

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RL.3.3

CCSS.RL.4.3

CCSS.RL.5.3