Revising

What does the R in ARMS stand for?

• rewrite

• remove

• revise

• rejoice

Which word would best replace "happy" to make the sentence more descriptive: "The dog was happy"?

• Sad

• Joyful

• Angry

• Tired

Which sentence needs to be revised?

• The sun sets in the west.

• The book on the table is red.

• The girl she went to the store.

Which sentence is most clear and correct?

• The dog barked. The cat meowed. The bird chirped.

• The dog barked, the cat meowed, and the bird chirped.

• The dog barked, the cat meowed. The bird chirped.

• The dog barked and the cat meowed the bird chirped.

What is the best way to combine these sentences for clarity: "The boy is running. He is fast."?

• The boy is running quickly.

• The fast boy is running.

• Running is fast the boy.

• The boy he is running fast.

How can you improve the sentence "The car is fast" by adding more detail?

• The car is red.

• The fast car.

• The car is very fast on the highway.

• The car is.

Which sentence needs a word removed to be more clear?

• The dog barked loudly.

• The cat she is sleeping.

• The bird sings beautifully.

• The fish swims quickly.

What is the best way to rearrange the ideas in the sentence "Because it was raining, the game was canceled" for clarity?

• The game was canceled because it was raining.

• It was raining, the game was canceled.

• The game because it was raining was canceled.

• Canceled was the game because it was raining.

How can you improve the sentence "The flowers are pretty" by adding more detail?

• The flowers are.

• The flowers in the garden are pretty.

• Pretty flowers are there.

• The flowers.

Which sentence is more coherent?

• The sun is bright. The sky is blue. The grass is green.

• The sun is bright, the sky is blue, and the grass is green.

• The sun is bright the sky is blue the grass is green.

• Bright is the sun, blue is the sky, green is the grass.