Unit 4 Common Assessment (Revise and Editing)

Carolina has included a sentence that does not belong in the first paragraph (sentences 1–6). Which sentence from paragraph 1 has information unnecessary to this story? Fill in the check box with your selection.

• My best friend, Shay, was going to science camp.

• One summer, I really wanted to go to swimming camp.

• The only problem was the $50 fee for the camp.

• I didn’t have that much money.

• But I really wanted to go to the camp.

Tags

CCSS.RL.1.3

CCSS.RL.2.3

CCSS.RL.3.3

CCSS.RL.4.3

CCSS.RL.5.3

Carolina wants to combine the ideas in sentences 7 and 8. On the lines provided, write a new sentence that combines these ideas in a clear and effective way.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

Carolina wants to use a better word than went in sentence 17. What word BEST replaces went in sentence 17?

• raced

• rode

• sat

• walked

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.K.1B

Carolina wants to improve the conclusion of her paper. Which sentence BEST replaces sentence 27?

• Too bad I didn’t start helping others sooner.

• My neighbors really helped me out that day.

• That day, helping others solved many problems.

• I can’t wait to see my best friend, Shay, after camp.