Revisions

Choose the best descriptive sentence to replace the underlined sentence: "This was definitely the most boring dinner party Joe had ever been forced to attend."

• Joe was not enjoying the dinner party.

• The party was really not Joe's favorite type of event.

• The dinner party was completely uninteresting for Joe.

• Not one single topic of conversation interested Joe during the time-consuming dinner.

Choose the best sentence to connect the underlined sentences.

• Devon grabbed a bottle of water to drink before his run.

• The coach made me feel so much more confident about my running.

• I wanted to try to run at the same pace as Devon so that we could talk.

• After our run, I realized that the coach was right, and I gave a big high-five to Devon!

Which sentence does not belong in the narrative because it does not follow the order of events in the rest of the narrative?

• My cousin Tony just got the most incredible job!

• He is only 17 years old, but a local company hired him.

• Tony feels so lucky to earn money for doing something he loves.

• When Tony gets to work, he begins to play their new video games!

Choose the best sentence to connect the underlined sentences.

• Devon grabbed a bottle of water to drink before his run.

• The coach made me feel so much more confident about my running.

• I wanted to try to run at the same pace as Devon so that we could talk.

• After our run, I realized that the coach was right, and I gave a big high-five to Devon!

What did the family forget to pack for their camping trip?

• Sleeping bags

• Flashlights

• Rain gear

• Food

What did the family do when it started to rain?

• Went for a hike

• Played flashlight games

• Cooked dinner

• Went swimming

What was the reason for the camping trip?

• To celebrate a birthday

• To enjoy the summer

• To spend quality time before graduation

• To learn survival skills

What did the family borrow from a friend?

• A tent

• A flashlight

• A large tarp

• A camping stove

What was the main purpose of the science project mentioned in the text?

• To see if sugar water increases the energy level of mice.

• To find out if mice prefer plain water.

• To determine the best type of wheel for mice.

• To see if mice can live without water.

What did the narrator do to ensure the mice were exactly the same?

• Bought them from different stores.

• Made sure they were the same age and weight.

• Fed them different diets.

• Gave them different types of wheels.