STAAR Edit and Revise Review

What change should be made in sentence 2?

• Change palo duro to Palo Duro

• Change large to larger

• Delete the word so

• Change by to from

What change should be made in sentence 7?

• F. Change had reached to are reaching

• G. Change canyons to canyon’s

• H. Insert a comma after top

• J. Change after to by

What is the MOST effective way to revise sentence 2?

• Excitedly, children talk inside the tents about topics like slime, magic tricks, and pet daycare.

• Children talk excitedly about topics inside the tents like slime, magic tricks, and pet daycare.

• Inside the tents children talk excitedly about topics like slime, magic tricks, and pet daycare.

• Children talk inside the tents about topics like slime, magic tricks, and pet daycare excitedly.

Which sentence should Julie add after sentence 27 to improve the conclusion of her paper?

• Every year more children participate in the fair.

• The Acton Children’s Business Fair might lead to more products designed by children in stores.

• It is amazing what children can do when adults support them.

• The Acton Children’s Business Fairs help prepare the future business leaders of tomorrow.

10 Which transition should be added to the beginning of sentence 25?

• F. Fortunately

• G. Then

• H. Certainly

• J. Now

The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere. 
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?

• delete the comma after cactus

• change everywhere to every  where

• change dessert to desert

• make no change

Me and my brother went over there because they had lots of different board games to play! 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• Change me and my brother to my brother and I

• change lots to lot's

• change there to their

• no change is needed

What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• change sunrise to sun  rise 

• change beautiful to beautifull

• change lite to light 

• no change is needed

the little girl was quite excited to go shopping at the mall with her grandmother. 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• change the to The

• change quite to quiet

• change grandmother to Grandmother

• no change is needed

What correction can be made to the following sentence?

Kaitlyn and Todd played in the treehouse

• Changed played to play

• Change Kaitlyn to kaitlyn

• Add a period after treehouse

• Change the to a