Paragraph Editing Practice

What is the correct way to write sentence 8?

• F She promised her mother that she would succeed consequently, she walked the four-mile distance daily, between her home and school.

• G She promised her mother that she would succeed consequently she walked the four-mile distance daily between her home and school.

• H She promised her mother that she would succeed. Consequently, she walked; the four-mile distance daily between her home and school.

• J She promised her mother that she would succeed. Consequently, she walked the four-mile distance daily between her home and school.

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CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 10?

• Change have run to ran

• Delete the comma after year

• Change was forced to is forced

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1B

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

What change should Gena make in sentence 17?

• Insert a comma after September

• Change whom to who

• Change proficient to proficiant

• Change came to comes

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.2.2B

CCSS.L.3.2B

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

17 What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 25?

• A Insert a comma after performance

• B Change the comma after 1926 to a semicolon

• C Change mechanical to machanical

• D No change should be made.

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.4.2C

How does sentence 28 need to be changed?

• F Change Similar to Similarly

• G Change female to females

• H Change started to would start

• J Insert a comma after Club

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

Being able to hear those voices from the past is a privilage young people should be grateful to have.

What change should be made in sentence 9?

(Use a dictionary to check spelling)

• Insert a comma after past

• Change is to are

• Change privilage to privilege

• Change grateful to gratefull

Evidence also suggests that the way you hold the rest of your body can affect how you feel. Amy Cuddy did a study on how “power poses” affect people. She is a social psychologist at Harvard University. A power pose is a way of holding your body that suggests you’re in control of a situation. What is the most effective way to combine sentences 12 and 13? (Watch out for run-ons and comma splices. Read slowly and check the flow of the sentences.)

• Amy Cuddy did a study on how “power poses” affect people she is a social psychologist at Harvard University.

• Amy Cuddy did a study on how “power poses” affect people, a social psychologist at Harvard University.

• Amy Cuddy, a social psychologist at Harvard University, did a study on how “power poses” affect people.

• Amy Cuddy did a study, at Harvard University and with a social psychologist, on how “power poses” affect people.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

What is the correct way to write the following sentence? 'The teacher said that the students should read the book however many of them did not.'

• A) The teacher said that the students should read the book, however, many of them did not.

• B) The teacher said that the students should read the book; however, many of them did not.

• C) The teacher said that the students should read the book however, many of them did not.

• D) The teacher said that the students should read the book. However many of them did not.

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CCSS.L.9-10.2A

Which word best completes the sentence? 'The committee was _______ in their decision to award the prize to the most deserving candidate.'

• A) unanimous

• B) divided

• C) uncertain

• D) hesitant

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.1.1F

What change, if any, needs to be made in the following sentence? 'The artist, who was known for his abstract paintings was invited to the gallery opening.'

• A) Insert a comma after paintings

• B) Change was to is

• C) Change known to know

• D) Make no change

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.4.2C