What is the correct way to write sentence 8?
Paragraph Editing Practice

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English
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9th Grade
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Hard
Sarah Williams
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1.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
1 min • 1 pt
F She promised her mother that she would succeed consequently, she walked the four-mile distance daily, between her home and school.
G She promised her mother that she would succeed consequently she walked the four-mile distance daily between her home and school.
H She promised her mother that she would succeed. Consequently, she walked; the four-mile distance daily between her home and school.
J She promised her mother that she would succeed. Consequently, she walked the four-mile distance daily between her home and school.
2.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
1 min • 1 pt
What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 10?
Change have run to ran
Delete the comma after year
Change was forced to is forced
Make no change
3.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
1 min • 1 pt
What change should Gena make in sentence 17?
Insert a comma after September
Change whom to who
Change proficient to proficiant
Change came to comes
4.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
1 min • 1 pt
17 What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 25?
A Insert a comma after performance
B Change the comma after 1926 to a semicolon
C Change mechanical to machanical
D No change should be made.
5.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
1 min • 1 pt
How does sentence 28 need to be changed?
F Change Similar to Similarly
G Change female to females
H Change started to would start
J Insert a comma after Club
6.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
1 min • 1 pt
Being able to hear those voices from the past is a privilage young people should be grateful to have.
What change should be made in sentence 9?
(Use a dictionary to check spelling)
Insert a comma after past
Change is to are
Change privilage to privilege
Change grateful to gratefull
7.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
1 min • 1 pt
Evidence also suggests that the way you hold the rest of your body can affect how you feel. Amy Cuddy did a study on how “power poses” affect people. She is a social psychologist at Harvard University. A power pose is a way of holding your body that suggests you’re in control of a situation. What is the most effective way to combine sentences 12 and 13? (Watch out for run-ons and comma splices. Read slowly and check the flow of the sentences.)
Amy Cuddy did a study on how “power poses” affect people she is a social psychologist at Harvard University.
Amy Cuddy did a study on how “power poses” affect people, a social psychologist at Harvard University.
Amy Cuddy, a social psychologist at Harvard University, did a study on how “power poses” affect people.
Amy Cuddy did a study, at Harvard University and with a social psychologist, on how “power poses” affect people.
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