(2)Editing/Revision: Traits Whales, Popcorn, Art of Navigation

What change should be made in sentence 3?

• Change well to welled

• Change hear to heard

• Change It to They

• Change can to could

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CCSS.RL.2.10

CCSS.RL.3.10

CCSS.RL.3.6

CCSS.RL.4.10

CCSS.RL.4.6

What change should be made in sentence 4?

• Change their to the're

• Change and to but

• Insert a comma after each

• Change found to find

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 7?

• Change whales to Whales

• Change use to used

• Change different to diferent

• No change is needed.

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CCSS.RI.2.5

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

What change needs to be made in sentence 3?

• Change a to an

• Change watch to watched

• Change cant to can’t

• Change it to them

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CCSS.RI.2.3

CCSS.RI.2.5

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.5

What is the correct way to write sentence 4?

• It is the number one snack food at baseball games.

• It was the number one snack food at baseball games.

• It are the number one snack food at baseball games.

• It were the number one snack food at baseball games.

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CCSS.RI.2.3

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

What change should be made in sentence 8?

• Change discovered to discovers

• Change spanish to Spanish

• Change explorers to explorer

• Change years to year’s

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CCSS.RF.2.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

Which sentence should replace sentence 7 to BEST state the central idea of this paper?

• What if you were in the middle of the ocean?

• Do people always go to the ocean?

• The oceans are big and beautiful.

• Everyone navigates in the middle of the ocean.

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CCSS.RI.2.2

CCSS.RI.3.2

CCSS.RI.4.2

CCSS.RL.2.2

CCSS.RL.3.2

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 17 and 18?

• A sun high in the sky meant it was early in the day a sun low in the sky meant night was coming.

• A sun high in the sky meant it was early in the day and a sun low in the sky meant night was coming.

• A sun high in the sky meant it was early in the day, and a sun low in the sky meant night was coming.

• A sun high in the sky meant it was early in the day then a sun low in the sky meant night was coming.

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CCSS.RF.2.3C

CCSS.RF.2.4

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

How should sentence 23 be revised so that it does not repeat information?

• If the birds circled the boat because of the birds then they knew land was still far away.

• If the birds circled then they knew land the boat was still far away because of the birds.

• If the birds circled the boat, then they knew land was still far away because of the birds.

• If the birds circled the boat, then they knew land was still far away.

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CCSS.RF.2.3F

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

Which supporting detail BEST follows sentence 33?

• There are useful instruments in the world of navigation.

• This was a line that had knots tied in it, and it was tossed overboard.

• It was a very useful line.

• The line had to be a straight line.

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CCSS.RI.2.1

CCSS.RI.3.2

CCSS.RL.2.1

CCSS.RL.3.1

CCSS.RL.3.2