Revising and Editing Questions

What is the BEST way to revise sentence 14?

• After we got off the ferry and into a rental car, wildlife is what my mother began looking for and a good place to turn off the road.

• After we got off the ferry and into a rental car, my mother began looking for a good place to turn off the road to look for wildlife.

• After we got off the ferry to begin looking for wildlife, we were into a rental car, and my mother was looking for a good place to turn off.

• After we got off the ferry and into a rental car and began looking for wildlife, my mother began looking for a good place.

Tags

CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Niko has included a sentence that does not belong in the fourth paragraph (sentences 15–19). Which sentence should he remove from this paragraph?

• Sentence 15

• Sentence 17

• Sentence 18

• Sentence 19

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

The word unusual is not the MOST appropriate word to use in sentence 25. Select the ONE correct word that should replace unusual in this sentence. When I entered the cafeteria and saw everyone else’s models on display, I felt even more ______ about mine.

• indifferent

• suspicious

• irritated

• embarrassed

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CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RL.3.3

CCSS.RL.4.3

CCSS.RL.5.3

Niko forgot to include this sentence in the last paragraph (sentences 29-33). "I have the satisfaction of knowing that I won't have to scramble at the last minute." Where is the BEST place to insert this sentence?

• After sentence 29

• After sentence 30

• After sentence 32

• After sentence 33

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CCSS.L.4.1F

What change should be made in sentence 2?

• Change Headlines to headlines

• Change allow to allows

• Insert a comma after readers

• Change quickly to quick

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

What change should be made in sentence 6?

• Change if to since

• Change dominates to domanates

• Change the semicolon after news to a comma

• Change about to in

Tags

CCSS.RI.2.8

CCSS.RI.4.8

CCSS.RI.5.8

CCSS.RI.6.8

CCSS.RI.7.8

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 8?

• Change use to using

• Change that to they

• Change automatically to automatic

• No change is needed.

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

What change should be made in sentence 9?

• Change complain to complaining

• Change were to are

• Delete the comma after distracting

• Change annoying to anoying

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.10

CCSS.RI.11-12.10

CCSS.RI.7.10

CCSS.RI.8.10

CCSS.RI.9-10.10

What change should be made in sentence 4?

• Change salvage to selvage

• Change was to convince to were to convince

• Change that to when

• Change from to with

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.10

CCSS.RL.4.10

CCSS.RL.5.10

CCSS.RL.5.6

CCSS.RL.6.10

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 6?

• Insert a comma after Nathan

• Change said to says

• Change whole to hole

• No change is needed.

Tags

CCSS.RL.2.6

CCSS.RL.8.3