Birthday Bummer: Revising/Editing

How should sentence 1 be changed?

• Change Hui's to Huis

• Change big day to Big Day

• Change had to have

• Change finaly to finally

What change should be made in sentence 5?

• Change breckfast to breakfast

• Delete the comma after breckfast

• Change felt to feeled

• Change his to he's

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 9?

• Change mother to Mother

• Change was calling to called

• Change fevver to fever

• Make no change

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 14?

• Change knew to new

• Change write to right

• Insert a comma after thing

• No change should be made in this sentence

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