Outdoor Activities Revise and Edit

1.How should sentence 2 be changed?

• A. Delete the comma after "air"

• B. Replace 'too' with 'to'

• C. Insert 'most' before 'best'

• D. Sentence 2 should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.3.1G

2.Which of the following transition words or phrases could BEST be added before sentence 9?

• A. In other words,

• B. For example,

• C. Also,

• D. In conclusion,

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CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

3.What change should be made in sentence 1?

• A. Change 'to' to 'too'

• B. Replace 'no' with 'any'

• C. Change 'There' to 'Their'

• D. Replace 'than' with 'then'

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CCSS.L.1.1D

CCSS.L.3.1A

4. Which sentence should be deleted from his paper?

• A. Sentence 3

• B. Sentence 7

• C. Sentence 10

• D. Sentence 12

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CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

5. How should sentence 10 be changed?

• A. Replace 'spended' with 'spent'

• B. Change 'have' to 'has'

• C. Insert a comma after 'weekends'

• D. Sentence 10 should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

6.What is the BEST way to combine sentences 13 and 14?

• A. Having to choose is the most difficult thing. Because I love them all.

• B. Having to choose is the most difficult thing but I love them all.

• C. Having to choose is the most difficult thing because I love them all.

• D. Having to choose is the most difficult thing, I love them all.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

7. Trevor wants to add details to sentence 11. Which answer choice shows the BEST way to rewrite sentence 11 with added details?

• A. There are better choices than riding in the boat.

• B. Besides riding in the boat, I enjoy jumping on my trampoline or playing tag or hide-and-seek with my friends at home.

• C. There are even funner activities than riding in the boat.

• D. Riding in the boat and fishing with my dad at the lake are pastimes I enjoy as well.

8. What change should be made in sentence 12?

• A. Replace 'live' with 'lived'

• B. Delete the comma after 'fish'

• C. Change 'lake' to 'Lake'

• D. Change 'want' to 'wants'

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

9. How should sentence 4 be changed?

• A. Insert quotation marks before 'Son'

• B. Delete the comma after 'night'

• C. Change 'Dad' to 'dad'

• D. Change the question mark to a period

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

10. Which of the following could Trevor add after the last sentence to create the most effective closing for his paper?

• A. I know not everyone gets the opportunity to experience the exciting things my family does, and I am grateful for every adventure we have.

• B. In addition, I could always choose to sit at home and relax on the couch.

• C. Experiences are awesome, especially when you get to hunt, ride dirt bikes, fish, ski, boat ride, and many other fun stuff.

• D. That's all I could think about for this paper, so I hope you really, really enjoyed it because I did my best to tell you all about the stuff I like to do on the weekends.