A Fall to Learn By

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1?

• Do not capitalize Crash and Plop

• Change Crash to Crashe

• Replace periods with exclamation marks after Wham, Crash, and Plop

• Make no change

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?

• Change headed to head

• Change me to I

• Change skating to skate

• Make no change

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 6 and 7?

• I was such a good skater, I decided to teach her.

• Since I was such a good skater and I decided to teach her.

• Since I was such a good skater when I decided to teach her.

• Since I was such a good skater, I decided to teach her.

Terrence would like to add the following sentence to the second paragraph (sentences 3-7). 'I became the teacher, and she became the student.' Where is the BEST place to insert this sentence?

• After sentence 4

• At the beginning of the paragraph

• At the end of the paragraph

• After sentence 6

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 8?

• Change faced to face

• Delete the comma after other

• Change mind to mine

• Make no change

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 10?

• Change swinged to swung

• Change the first was to were

• Change around to round

• Make no change

Terrence needs to add a transition word or phrase to help his readers move from sentence 9 to sentence 10. Which transition could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 10?

• Then

• After

• Finally

• Before

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 11?

• Change write to right

• Delete the comma after position

• Change the was to were

• Make no change

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 12?

• Change released to relesed

• Change skated to skate

• Insert a comma after hands

• Make no change

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 13?

• Change While to After

• Change beam to beem

• Delete the comma after excitement

• Make no change