Editing: "Learning the Value of Storytelling"

1. 48. What change should Ming‑Ha make in sentence 1?

• 1. a. Change say to saying

• 1. b. Insert a colon after teenagers

• 1. c. Change Are to Our

• 1. d. Change the question mark to a period

49. 49. What change should be made in sentence 9?

• a. Change group’s to groups’

• b. Insert a comma after together

• c. Change preserve to preserving

• d. Change its to their

50. 50. What is the correct way to write sentence 16?

• 1. a. I had always been impressed that I had so many aunts and uncles. I realized now how hard my grandmother worked to everyone could have a comfortable life.

• 1. b. I had always been impressed that I had so many aunts and uncles and I realized now how hard my grandmother worked so everyone could have a comfortable life.

• 1. c. I had always been impressed. That I had so many aunts and uncles I realized now how hard my grandmother worked so everyone could have a comfortable life.

• d. I had always been impressed that I had so many aunts and uncles so I realized now how hard my grandmother worked so everyone could have a comfortable life.

1. 51. How should Ming‑Ha change sentence 18?

• a. Insert a semicolon after buns

• 1. b. Change had learned to learns

• 1. c. Insert a comma after make

• 1. d. Change Bakery to bakery

52. 52. What change should be made in sentence 21?

• a. Change worked to works

• b. Change hour’s to hours

• c . Change the comma after children to a semicolon

• d. Change eventually to eventuelly