Revising Thursday Warm-Up

(31) Even the smallest detail must be considered when building new roller coasters. (32) Meanwhile, too much paint on a track can cause friction.

Greg has used an inappropriate transition at the beginning of sentence 32. Which transition should replace Meanwhile in this sentence?

• Therefore

• For example

• At least

• Similarly

(38) As science and technology advance, designers are constantly searching for ways to build faster and more complex roller coasters.

Greg would like to provide additional support for the idea he has presented in sentence 38. Which sentence BEST follows and supports sentence 38?

• Most roller coasters have several hills and twists, although some hills are steeper than others.

• Building elaborate roller coasters costs amusement parks a lot of money

• Other types of rides are being built at amusement parks because of limited space for traditional roller coasters.

• Designers are excited and hopeful about the possibilities of roller-coaster designs.

(41) The sky is the limit when it comes to roller-coaster design. (42) Yet, one thing remains constant. (43) Science should be used to build a roller coaster.

Greg wants to improve the conclusion of his paper. Which sentence should replace sentence 43 to bring his paper to a more effective conclusion?

• Science is particularly useful when a new roller coaster is being designed.

• Students who want to become roller-coaster designers should know many science concepts.

• A well-designed roller coaster relies on knowledge of the laws of force and motion to ensure the ride is an amazing experience for everyone on board.

• For people to enjoy roller-coaster rides, designers need to refer to the laws of force and motion during early stages of design.

(45) Roller coasters are a popular attraction at amusement parks worldwide. (46) They offer thrilling experiences that are hard to match.

Which sentence should follow sentence 46 to provide a logical continuation of the paragraph?

• Some roller coasters are made of wood, while others are made of steel.

• Roller coasters are often the main attraction at theme parks.

• Amusement parks also offer a variety of food and games.

• Many people prefer water rides over roller coasters.

(50) Safety is a top priority when designing roller coasters. (51) Engineers must consider various factors to ensure a safe ride.

Which sentence should replace sentence 51 to better elaborate on the safety measures taken?

• Roller coasters can be found in many countries around the world.

• Safety measures include regular maintenance and thorough testing of all components.

• Engineers need to be creative when designing roller coasters.

• Some roller coasters are designed to be family-friendly.

(60) The thrill of a roller coaster is often attributed to its speed and height. (61) Riders experience a rush of adrenaline as they zoom through the track.

Which sentence should follow sentence 61 to further explain the experience of riding a roller coaster?

• Many people enjoy the feeling of weightlessness during the ride.

• Roller coasters are usually located near the entrance of amusement parks.

• Some roller coasters have loops and corkscrews.

• Amusement parks are busiest during the summer months.

(70) Roller coasters are designed to provide a thrilling experience. (71) The design process involves careful planning and execution.

Which sentence should replace sentence 71 to better explain the design process?

• Roller coasters are often the tallest structures in amusement parks.

• Designers use computer simulations to test the safety and excitement of the ride.

• Some roller coasters are themed after popular movies.

• Amusement parks are popular destinations for families.

(80) The popularity of roller coasters has grown over the years. (81) Many people are drawn to the excitement they offer.

Which sentence should follow sentence 81 to further elaborate on the appeal of roller coasters?

• Roller coasters are often featured in advertisements for amusement parks.

• The combination of speed, height, and unexpected twists makes them irresistible to thrill-seekers.

• Some people prefer to watch roller coasters rather than ride them.

• Amusement parks are open year-round in some locations.

(90) Roller coasters have evolved significantly since their inception. (91) Early designs were simple and lacked the complexity of modern rides.

Which sentence should replace sentence 91 to provide more detail about the evolution of roller coasters?

• Modern roller coasters can reach speeds of over 100 miles per hour.

• Amusement parks have various attractions besides roller coasters.

• Early roller coasters were made of wood and had basic tracks.

• Some roller coasters are designed to be enjoyed by children.