CW Fixing Sentence Structure 2

Sebastian climbed the hill the view from the top was amazing.

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After Lily and Rickon planted flowers in the garden.

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Elijah packed snacks, and Conor grabbed the sunscreen.

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Myana took pictures of the birds she wanted to remember the moment.

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Because Kim forgot her jacket.

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Run-On: Fatima set up the picnic blanket the ants arrived immediately.

• Fatima set up the picnic blanket; the ants arrived immediately.

• Fatima set up the picnic blanket, the ants arrived immediately.

• Fatima set up the picnic blanket because the ants arrived.

• Fatima set up the picnic blanket and the ants arrive.

Fragment: While Elijah was hiking in the woods.

• Elijah was hiking in the woods.

• While Elijah in the woods.

• While Elijah was hiking in the woods, he saw a deer.

• Elijah while hiking.

Run-On: Conor rode his skateboard down the hill it was steep and fast.

• Conor rode his skateboard, it was steep and fast.

• Conor rode his skateboard down the hill, it was steep and fast.

• Conor rode his skateboard down the hill. It was steep and fast.

• Conor rode and the hill fast and steep.

Fragment: Because Myana enjoys sunny weather.

• Because Myana enjoys sunny weather, she spends more time outside.

• Myana enjoys sunny weather.

• Because Myana weather.

• Myana outside because.

Run-On: Kim took a nap in the hammock Sebastian made lemonade.

• Kim took a nap, Sebastian made lemonade.

• Kim took a nap in the hammock, and Sebastian made lemonade.

• Kim took a nap in the hammock because Sebastian lemonade.

• Kim nap, Sebastian made lemonade.