STAAR Practice 1: Revising and Editing

Which change should be made to sentence 2?

• Insert a comma after Coleman

• Change Mother to mother

• Delete the quotation marks

• No change should be made.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

How should sentence 3 be changed?

• Insert quotation marks at the beginning of the sentence

• Change She to her

• Change pilot to Pilot

• Sentence 3 should not be changed.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 6?

• She just wouldn’t give up.

• Just giving up, she wouldn’t have done.

• Because just wouldn’t give up.

• Just wouldn’t, give up

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

What change should be made to sentence 17?

• Change couldn’t have to couldn’t of

• Insert a comma after asked

• Change more good to better

• No change should be made in sentence 17.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What change should be made to sentence 19?

• Delete the quotation marks at the beginning of the sentence

• Change Welcome to Welcomes

• Change gentlemen to gentlemans

• Sentence 19 should not be changed.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

What is the correct way to write sentence 21?

• Bessie Coleman walked on the field and went wild.

• Bessie Coleman walked onto the field, and the crowd went wild.

• Bessie Coleman walked onto the field. But the crowd went wild.

• Bessie Coleman, walked onto the field and the crowd went wild.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

How does sentence 26 need to be changed?

• Change They all to They'll

• Delete the comma

• Change the period to an exclamation point

• Sentence 26 does not need to be changed.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2B

CCSS.L.4.3B

CCSS.L.K.2B

How should sentence 31 be changed?

• Change doctor to Doctor

• Change someday to somedays

• Change have to has

• Change french to French

Tags

CCSS.L.2.2C

What change needs to be made in sentence 1?

• Change did to done

• Change On The to on the

• Delete the comma after Plain

• No change needs to be made in this sentence.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

How should sentence 2 be changed?

• Change Its to It's

• Change huge to hugest

• Change took to taken

• Sentence 2 should not be changed.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D