Avoiding wordiness & redundancy

The sentence below is an example of a

"The energetic pre-school teacher asked the students to circle around the room."

• correct sentence.

• wordy sentence.

• redundant sentence.

What word/s should be removed to correct the redundant sentence below?

"The police reached the scene of the accident and began the investigation."

• police

• of the accident

• began

• investigation

Which word is unnecessary in the sentence?

The dead corpse was found in the church yard.

• dead

• corpse

• church yard

I, personally will not be attending the match

• I

• personally

• attending

Which sentence is written correctly?

• My two feet are hurting

• My feet are hurting

• My feet are hurting me

Which word can be removed? The house is rectangular in shape

• rectangular

• in shape

• shape

What is the best way to write this sentence. When we were all gathered and assembled together, we boarded the bus

• When we were all gathered and assembled, we boarded the bus.

• When we were all gathered together we boarded the bus.

• When we were assembled, we boarded the bus.

Correct this sentence:

There are many species and types of birds that are all different

• There are many species of birds

• There are manydifferent species of birds

• There different species of birds

Which word/s should remain in this sentence? This task should be done by each of you individually.

• individually

• by each of you

• by each

What happens to the reader when writers use redundancy and wordiness

• They become tired and go to sleep

• They become tired and lose interest

• They lose interest and close their chromebooks