English 1 Revising and Editing

Ramsey wants to use a more effective and descriptive word than big in sentence 7. Which word should replace big in this sentence?

• through

• overwhelming

• extensive

• cumbersome

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1F

CCSS.L.2.1E

Ramsey wants to add this sentence to the third paragraph (sentences 10–13).

In fact, it can take many centuries for them to reach a significant size.

Where should this sentence be added?

• After sentence 10

• After sentence 11

• After sentence 12

• After sentence 13

Tags

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.3

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

Luisa wants to combine the ideas in sentences 11 and 12. In the space provided, write a new sentence that combines these ideas in a clear and effective way.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What revision, if any, is needed in sentence 5?

• 
• 
• No changes needed

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F