ARMS Revising

What should you do next after revising your writing with the ARMS method?

• read it aloud

• rewrite it

• edit it

• publish it

What is the third step in the writing process according to the video?

• revising

• editing

• drafting

• prewriting

What does 'A' in ARMS stand for?

• arrange

• assess

• add

• attach

Which example shows how to 'Add' to improve writing?

• Adding "buttery and crunchy" to describe popcorn

• moving a misplaced modifier

• removing redundant phrase

• substituting boring words

What should be removed from writing according to the ARMS method?

• necessary comparisons

• well-placed modifiers

• redundant or off-topic elements

• interesting details

What is an example of a redundant phrase that can be removed?

• He was elated when he won

• Going to the movies is fun

• She served sandwiches on paper plates

• Describing movies as fun right after fantastic

What does the 'M' in ARMS stand for?

• modifier

• minimize

• move

• merge

Where should the phrase "on paper plates" be moved to clarify the sentence?

• after "children"

• before "she"

• after "sandwiches"

• after "served"

What does the 'S' in ARMS stand for?

• substitute

• simplify

• summarize

• support

What word from the example was substituted to make the writing more interesting?

• elated

• won

• spelling bee

• happy