Revising Your Persuasive Essay: Making Your Point with Evidence

The video tutorial teaches how to revise persuasive essays by ensuring evidence clearly supports the writer's point. It reviews the writing process, focusing on the revision stage, and explains how to improve writing by making changes. The tutorial provides examples of common mistakes and demonstrates how to add details to clarify evidence. It guides viewers through identifying topic sentences, rereading paragraphs, and adding sentences to show how evidence proves a point. The lesson concludes with a summary of the revision process.

How can adding details improve your persuasive essay?

Describe how the lesson suggests you can clarify the meaning of 'put to sleep' in your writing.

What was the topic sentence of the paragraph about adopting pets?