Revising for Stronger Word Choice

This video tutorial teaches how to revise essays for stronger word choice by using synonyms. It outlines the writing process, emphasizing the importance of precise language to create vivid imagery. The tutorial provides steps to identify common words and replace them with more precise synonyms, considering their connotations. It demonstrates applying these revisions in an essay about Elizabeth Van Loo, highlighting the impact of word choice on reader perception. The lesson concludes with a review of the revision process and encourages further refinement of writing.

What is the main focus of revising for stronger word choice in this lesson?

• To use more complex words

• To relate words to their synonyms

• To write longer sentences

• To avoid using any synonyms

Which step in the writing process involves revising for stronger word choice?

• Revising the essay

• Reading the text

• Drafting the essay

• Generating a claim

Why is it important to use precise words in writing?

• To create a specific picture in the reader's mind

• To make the text longer

• To confuse the reader

• To use more adjectives

What is the first step in revising for stronger word choice?

• Re-read the draft

• Use a thesaurus

• Ask a friend for help

• Rewrite the draft

Which word was replaced with 'rescued' in the example?

• Saved

• Worst

• Plan

• Hero

What connotation does the word 'rescued' carry?

• Negative

• Neutral

• Positive

• Ambiguous

Which word was chosen to replace 'worst'?

• Bad

• Horrific

• Most awful

• Terrible

What is the connotation of the word 'scheme'?

• Ambiguous

• Neutral

• Positive

• Negative

How did Elizabeth Van Loo help save lives according to the revised essay?

• By teaching others

• By writing letters

• By using her wealth to bribe guards

• By organizing protests

What is the final step in revising for stronger word choice?

• Publish the essay

• Rewrite the new word into your draft

• Read the essay aloud

• Ask a teacher for feedback