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Writing: Revising and Editing- Sections 1 and 2

Total questions: 10

Worksheet time: 50mins

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Class
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1.

Read the question, and then chose the best answer.


What is the most effective way to combine these two sentences?

a)

This idea of taxation without representation is part of the reason our forefathers were determined, who wanted to separate from Great Britain and form their own nation.

b)

This idea of taxation without representation is part of the reason our forefathers were determined to separate from Great Britain and form their own nation.

c)

This idea of taxation without representation is part of the reason our forefathers were determined because they separated from Great Britain and formed their own nation.

d)

This idea of taxation without representation is part of the reason our forefathers were determined separating from Great Britain and forming their own nation,

2.

Read the question, and then chose the best answer.


What is the most effective way to revise the sentence?

a)

Because it's astounding to me, Texas has one of the lowest voter turnout rates in the United States.

b)

It's astounding to me what Texas has being one of the lowest voter turnout rates in the United States,

c)

It's astounding to me that Texas has one of the lowest voter turnout rates in the United States.

d)

As astounding as it is, also shocking that Texas has one of the lowest voter turnout rates in the United States.

3.

Read the question, and then chose the best answer.


What is the correct way to write the sentence?

a)

For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke, and it was obvious. That she was no happier about the arrangement than I was.

b)

For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke it was obvious that she was no happier about the arrangement than I was.

c)

For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke. Which made it obvious that she was no happier about the arrangement than I was.

d)

For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke. It was obvious that she was no happier about the arrangement than I was.

4.

Read the question, and then chose the best answer.


What is the correct way to write the sentences?

a)

For example, the venom of the Brazilian pit viper is the source of a drug used to treat high blood pressure, a component found in copperhead snake venom may soon be used to treat breast cancer.

b)

For example, the venom of the Brazilian pit viper is the source of a drug used to treat high blood pressure, and there is a component found in copperhead snake venom. Which may soon be used to treat breast cancer.

c)

For example, the venom of the Brazilian pit viper is the source of a drug used to treat high blood pressure, while a component found in copperhead snake venom may soon be used to treat breast cancer.

d)

For example, the venom of the Brazilian pit viper. It is the source of a drug used to treat high blood pressure, while a component found in copperhead snake venom may soon be used to treat breast cancer.

5.

Select the type of sentence or error.


Purdue offers many majors in engineering, Such as electrical, chemical, and industrial engineering.

a)

Fragment

b)

Run-on sentence

c)

Correct as is.

6.

Select the type of sentence or error.


The grocery store was really packed with people there must have been a big sale today,

a)

Fragment

b)

Run-on sentence.

c)

Correct as is.

7.

Select the type of sentence or error.


My dog had to go to the vet today, She cried and cried when they clipped her toenails, but then she was fine when they gave her a shot!

a)

Fragment

b)

Run-on sentence.

c)

Correct as is.

8.

Select the type of sentence or error.


Driving in the city during the evening rush hour.

a)

Fragment

b)

Run-on sentence.

c)

Correct as is.

9.

Select the type of sentence or error.


The book we had to read for class was really long my teacher doesn't seem to understand that we have other classes to read for too.

a)

Fragment

b)

Run-on sentence

c)

Correct as is.

10.

Select the type of sentence or error.


Went to the store to buy brownie mix.

a)

Fragment

b)

Run-on sentence.

c)

Correct as is.