Intro paragraph has background knowledge, why, and thesis

no background knowledge

i don't go to this school

my life is trash

Turned it in

DIdn't turn it in

I just send you emails and don't bother to look

I don't go here

Can I call my mom? I want to cry

My intro paragraph has a background, why, and thesis with 3 ideas

I still don't know what thesis is and I have not asked for help.

I still don't know what a thesis is and my classmates didn't help me.

I turned it in! It has a COMPLETE intro

I didn't turn it in but I'm going to do that right after this quiz

I just want to work at McDonalds even though I wont be able to afford to live

I need to do better! I'm going to start today!

turn in work that's neat, complete, and accurate ON TIME!

beg for extra credit even though I didn't do the regular credit

cry and pretend to lose my breath

send and email asking what I can do to get an A when I haven't turned in all of my work.

FO SHO

Nah, my mom will pay my bills

As soon as possible! You'll start seeing work turned in today and tomorrow

After mario cart tournament

When Ms. Bloch yells at me.

After you let me know what I'm missing. (that's not happening)

My broke friends

My lil friend who sits next to me in class

toys from the school store

Work is important because it takes me to the next level