Writing a diary entry - Iron Man

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Sentence 1

Focus: How my day went.

WAGOLL: Today was so strange, strange because whilst I was out fishing in a stream that ran down to the deep blue sea, my hook kept getting caught in the bushes.

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Sentence 2

Focus: How I feel about my fishing rod getting caught.

WAGOLL: I was frustrated, so I decided to stop what I was doing. I took a moment to look at the beautiful scenery that surrounded me.

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Sentence 3

WAGOLL: Suddenly, I had a feeling that I was being watched. It was like I could feel two eyes staring at the back of my head.

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Sentence 4:

Panicked, I turned around, but nothing was there. Like a tiger hunting for its prey, I began to search the vast horizon frantically.

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Sentence 5

WAGOLL: All of a sudden, I saw two bright green lights in the distance.

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Sentence 6:

WAGOLL: Anxious, I walked closer to them... A wave of sickness built in my stomach, and before my eyes, there stood a bizarre figure at the edge of the rocky, colossal cliff.

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Sentence 7:

WAGOLL: Curious, I looked closer at the mysterious monster that stood as tall as a skyscraper with a head as big as a dustbin.

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It peered back at me with its scary eyes as bright as headlamps. It was like a living nightmare. I wondered what it could be. I had never before seen anything like it! Who was it, and what was it doing here?

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Terrified, I ran home as fast as I could to tell my father about what I had witnessed. I could not wait to see what his reaction would be.

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