Editing Monday

Multiple Choice

Elizabeth saw an article in the Colorado gazette about the election of the president.

• add a comma after article

• change president to President

• Change an to a

• change gazette to Gazette

Multiple Choice

The dream of cruising like a bird remain unfulfilled

• remains

• remained

• remaining

• Sentence in correct

Multiple Choice

Jeremy had a basketball practice. Jeremy also having homework.

• Jeremy had basketball practice, but he also had homework.

• Jeremy had basketball practice, Jeremy also had homework to do.

• Jeremy had basketball practice, b

Multiple Choice

Maggies' dress was the most beautiful dress at the dance.

• change most beautiful to more beautiful

• change Maggies' to Maggie's

• Change dance to danse

• No revision is needed

Multiple Choice

To help my sister pick up her toys, I dropped down on my hands and knees.

• change help to helping

• change hands and knees to hand's and knee's

• change dropped to droped

• make no change