Writing Process: Revision

Reorder

Put the steps of the writing process in the correct order. Drag to reorder.

• Editing

• Drafting

• Publishing

• Revising

• Planning

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• 4
• 5

Match

Match each letter of the "ARMS" revision process with it's description.

• A

• R

• M

• S

Add details, stronger words & sentences.

Remove extra or unnecessary words/ideas.

Move words or sentences for clarity.

Substitute words with stronger words!

• Add details, stronger words & sentences.

• Remove extra or unnecessary words/ideas.

• Move words or sentences for clarity.

• Substitute words with stronger words!

Multiple Choice

True or false: It is okay if I cannot find anything in my writing that would make sense to move during the revision process.

• True

• False

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When revising, I will ​

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be able to find words that I should substitute with stronger or more specific words.

Read the passage: Testing Frustrations

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Multiple Choice

Which sentence does not support the topic from the passage on the previous slide and should be removed?

• Sentence 2

• Sentence 3

• Sentence 5

• None of the above

Testing Frustrations

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Multiple Choice

I want to add this detail: For example, I could skip the ones I'm having trouble with and return to them later. Where would this detail fit best in the paragraph?

• Before sentence 1

• After sentence 6

• Before sentence 6

• After sentence 4

Testing Frustrations

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Multiple Choice

I want to add this detail: I always make straight A grades on my homework. Where would this detail fit best in the paragraph?

• After sentence 1

• Before sentence 3

• After sentence 5

• Before sentence 4

Testing Frustrations

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Multiple Choice

Where should sentence 5 be moved to in order to help the flow of the paragraph?

• After sentence 1

• Before sentence 1

• After sentence 6

• After sentence 2

Read the passage: My Baby Sister

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Multiple Choice

Which sentence does NOT support the topic and should be removed?

• Sentence 1

• Sentence 4

• Sentence 5

• Sentence 6

Read the passage: My Baby Sister

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Multiple Choice

I want to add this detail: Sometimes she even cries in the middle of the night. Where would it fit best in the passage?

• After sentence 1

• After sentence 3

• Before sentence 5

• Before sentence 7

Read the passage: My Baby Sister

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Multiple Choice

Choose the best place to add this detail: He won't be able to play tricks on us when it's two against one!

• Before sentence 2

• Before sentence 5

• After sentence 6

• After sentence 3

Read the passage: My Baby Sister

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Multiple Choice

Where should sentence 8 be moved to improve the flow of the paragraph?

• After sentence 6

• After sentence 2

• Before sentence 5

• Before sentence 4