Editing and Revising Review Unit 3

​UNIT 3 Editing and Revising Review

By Susana Hernandez

Open Ended

1) Last weekend, Emma decided to go for a hike because the weather was perfect. 2) She packed a lunch before leaving. 3) The trail was longer than she expected. 4) Emma felt tired. 5) She didn’t want to give up. 6) The tall trees made the path feel even longer. 7) The birds were singing as she walked. 8) She reached a beautiful clearing where the sun was shining brightly. 9) Emma sat down to eat her lunch. 10) Suddenly, dark clouds appeared. 11) It started to rain. 12) Emma hurried back to her car. 13) The road was slippery, so she drove carefully. 14) Finally, she got home safely.

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 3 and 4?

Open Ended

1) Last weekend, Emma decided to go for a hike because the weather was perfect. 2) She packed a lunch before leaving. 3) The trail was longer than she expected. 4) Emma felt tired. 5) She didn’t want to give up. 6) The tall trees made the path feel even longer. 7) The birds were singing as she walked. 8) She reached a beautiful clearing where the sun was shining brightly. 9) Emma sat down to eat her lunch. 10) Suddenly, dark clouds appeared. 11) It started to rain. 12) Emma hurried back to her car. 13) The road was slippery, so she drove carefully. 14) Finally, she got home safely.

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 5 and 6?

Open Ended

1) Last weekend, Emma decided to go for a hike because the weather was perfect. 2) She packed a lunch before leaving. 3) The trail was longer than she expected. 4) Emma felt tired. 5) She didn’t want to give up. 6) The tall trees made the path feel even longer. 7) The birds were singing as she walked. 8) She reached a beautiful clearing where the sun was shining brightly. 9) Emma sat down to eat her lunch. 10) Suddenly, dark clouds appeared. 11) It started to rain. 12) Emma hurried back to her car. 13) The road was slippery, so she drove carefully. 14) Finally, she got home safely.

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 10 and 11?

Hotspot

Which THREE sentences should we delete in order to strengthen this story?

Multiple Choice

Maria loved painting more than anything else. Every afternoon, she would sit by the window with her brushes and colors, creating pictures of the world outside. She painted the trees, the birds, and the changing seasons. Her friends admired her talent and often asked to see her latest work. One day, Maria entered a local art contest. She worked hard on her painting for weeks. When the day of the contest arrived, she felt nervous but excited. The judges carefully examined each piece. Maria waited anxiously for the results.

What is an EFFECTIVE way to conclude this story?

• Then Maria went to bed.

• The end, or is it?

• Though she didn’t win, Maria knew this was just the beginning of her artistic journey.

• Maria never painted again because pencils were better.

Hotspot

Let's improve the introduction to his story by adding another sentence, where can this sentence be added?

Click on the dot where this should be added.

When he arrived, his grandparents greeted him warmly with big hugs and homemade cookies.

Match

Match the sentences and math them to the correct revisions

• I enjoy readed books before bed.

• We were danced at the party last night.

• She kept smile throughout the movie.

• We love travel to new places.

I enjoy reading books before bed.

We were dancing at the party last night.

She kept smiling throughout the movie.

We love traveling to new places.

• I enjoy reading books before bed.

• We were dancing at the party last night.

• She kept smiling throughout the movie.

• We love traveling to new places.

Multiple Choice

The following sentence is written in past tense, revise it and click the correct sentence.

I bringed lots of toys to school.

• I bring lots of toys to school

• I brought lots of toys to school

• I brings lots of toys to school

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Multiple Choice

Correct the following sentence:

They was playing outside all afternoon.

• He were playing outside all afternoon.

• They were playing outside all afternoon.

• They is playing outside all afternoon.