Aspire for Greatness: English 1

After the big fire the forest looked different.

• After the big fire, the forest looked different.
• After the big fire. The forest looked different.
• After the big fire. The forest looking different.
• NO CHANGE

Tags

CCSS.RF.5.3A

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.2.3C

CCSS.RF.2.3D

CCSS.RF.3.3B

Dead tree's lay on the ground next to the bare trunk's of burnt trees.

• Dead trees' lay on the ground next to the bare trunks' of burnt trees.
• Dead trees' lay on the ground next to the bare trunks of burnt trees.
• Dead tree's lay on the ground next to the bare trunks of burnt trees.
• Dead trees lay on the ground next to the bare trunks of burnt trees.

Tags

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

A layer of ash covered the green forest floor.

• A layer of ash had covered the green forest floor.
• A layer of ash, had covered, the green forest floor.
• A layer of ash covered the green Forest floor.
• NO CHANGE

Tags

CCSS.RF.5.3A

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.2.4

CCSS.RF.2.3F

CCSS.RF.2.3E

It seemed impossible. But one morning a bright green shoot sprouted up from the ground. 

• It seemed impossible, so one morning a bright green shoot sprouted up from the ground.
• It seemed impossible, but one morning a bright green shoot sprouted up from the ground.
• It seems impossible, but one morning a bright, green, shoot, sprouted, up from the ground.
• NO CHANGE

Tags

CCSS.RF.5.3A

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.2.4

CCSS.RF.4.3A

In the maze of charred trees. A tiny seeding began to grow.

• In a maze of charred tree's. A tiny seedling began to grow.
• In a maze of charred trees, a tiny seedling began to grow.
• In a maze of charred trees'. A tiny seedling began to grow. 
• NO CHANGE

Tags

CCSS.RF.5.3A

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.2.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.4.3A

It leaned toward the sun and stretched out it's tiny branches. 

• It leaned toward the sun, and stretched out its tiny branches.
• It leaned toward the sun, and stretched out it's tiny branches.
• It leaned toward the sun and stretched out its tiny branches.
• NO CHANGE

Tags

CCSS.RF.5.3A

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.2.3C

CCSS.RF.2.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

The little plant thought about what a beautiful place the forest must have been before the fire. 

• The little plant had been thinking about what a beautiful place the forest must have been before the fire.
• The little plant, thought about, what a beautiful place the forest must have been before the fire. 
• The little Plant thought about what a beautiful place the Forest must have been before the fire.
• NO CHANGE

Tags

CCSS.RF.5.3A

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.2.4

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.2.3E

The sun kept shining, the little plants hungry roots dug into the rich soil, and the little plant kept growing.

• The sun kept shining, the little plant's hungry roots dug into the rich soil, and the little plant kept growing.
• The sun kept shining the little plants hungry roots dug into the rich soil and the little plant kept growing.
• The Sun kept shining, and the little plants hungry root's dug into the rich soil, and the little plant kept growing.

Tags

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.2.3C

CCSS.RF.2.4

CCSS.RF.3.3B

Its delicate stem became a woody trunk, and its bare branches were soon filled with pointy pine needles. 

• It's delicate stem became a woody trunk, and its bare branches were soon filled with pointy pine needle's. 
• It's delicate stem became a woody trunk, and it's bare branches were soon filled with pointy pine needles'. 
• Its delicate stem became a woody trunk and its bare branches was soon filled with pointy pine needles. 
• NO CHANGE

Tags

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

By the end of the summer, the tiny sprout had become the first new tree in a brand new forest.

• By the end of the summer, the tiny sprout has become the first new tree in a brand new forest.
• By the end of the summer, the tiny Sprout had been becoming the first new tree in a brand new forest.
• By the end of the summer, the tiny sprout has became the first new tree in a brand new forest. 
• NO CHANGE

Tags

CCSS.RL.3.6

CCSS.RL.4.6

CCSS.RL.5.10

CCSS.RL.5.6

CCSS.RL.4.10