Aspire for Greatness: English 1

After the big fire the forest looked different.

• After the big fire, the forest looked different.
• After the big fire. The forest looked different.
• After the big fire. The forest looking different.
• NO CHANGE

Dead tree's lay on the ground next to the bare trunk's of burnt trees.

• Dead trees' lay on the ground next to the bare trunks' of burnt trees.
• Dead trees' lay on the ground next to the bare trunks of burnt trees.
• Dead tree's lay on the ground next to the bare trunks of burnt trees.
• Dead trees lay on the ground next to the bare trunks of burnt trees.

A layer of ash covered the green forest floor.

• A layer of ash had covered the green forest floor.
• A layer of ash, had covered, the green forest floor.
• A layer of ash covered the green Forest floor.
• NO CHANGE

It seemed impossible. But one morning a bright green shoot sprouted up from the ground. 

• It seemed impossible, so one morning a bright green shoot sprouted up from the ground.
• It seemed impossible, but one morning a bright green shoot sprouted up from the ground.
• It seems impossible, but one morning a bright, green, shoot, sprouted, up from the ground.
• NO CHANGE

In the maze of charred trees. A tiny seeding began to grow.

• In a maze of charred tree's. A tiny seedling began to grow.
• In a maze of charred trees, a tiny seedling began to grow.
• In a maze of charred trees'. A tiny seedling began to grow. 
• NO CHANGE

It leaned toward the sun and stretched out it's tiny branches. 

• It leaned toward the sun, and stretched out its tiny branches.
• It leaned toward the sun, and stretched out it's tiny branches.
• It leaned toward the sun and stretched out its tiny branches.
• NO CHANGE

The little plant thought about what a beautiful place the forest must have been before the fire. 

• The little plant had been thinking about what a beautiful place the forest must have been before the fire.
• The little plant, thought about, what a beautiful place the forest must have been before the fire. 
• The little Plant thought about what a beautiful place the Forest must have been before the fire.
• NO CHANGE

The sun kept shining, the little plants hungry roots dug into the rich soil, and the little plant kept growing.

• The sun kept shining, the little plant's hungry roots dug into the rich soil, and the little plant kept growing.
• The sun kept shining the little plants hungry roots dug into the rich soil and the little plant kept growing.
• The Sun kept shining, and the little plants hungry root's dug into the rich soil, and the little plant kept growing.

Its delicate stem became a woody trunk, and its bare branches were soon filled with pointy pine needles. 

• It's delicate stem became a woody trunk, and its bare branches were soon filled with pointy pine needle's. 
• It's delicate stem became a woody trunk, and it's bare branches were soon filled with pointy pine needles'. 
• Its delicate stem became a woody trunk and its bare branches was soon filled with pointy pine needles. 
• NO CHANGE

By the end of the summer, the tiny sprout had become the first new tree in a brand new forest.

• By the end of the summer, the tiny sprout has become the first new tree in a brand new forest.
• By the end of the summer, the tiny Sprout had been becoming the first new tree in a brand new forest.
• By the end of the summer, the tiny sprout has became the first new tree in a brand new forest. 
• NO CHANGE