Revising/Editing/Writing Practice

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 2?

• Insert up after dresses me

• Change close to clothes

• Insert a comma after close

• No change should be made.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2B

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 7?

• Change chose to choosed

• Change my to mine

• Capitalize the lion king

• No change should be made.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

How should sentence 9 be changed?

• Change become to be comes

• Change a to an

• Change jungle to Jungle

• Delete the word it

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

What is the correct way to write sentences 16 and 17?

• I like to climb to the top of the vines and look out over the jungle below.

• I like to climb to the top of the vines, and look out. Over the jungle below.

• I like to climb, to the top, of the vines and look out over the jungle below.

• Sentences 16 and 17 are correct

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 27?

• Change I to Me

• Change won to one

• Change the period to a question mark

• Sentence 27 does not need to be changed.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 29?

• Change has to have

• Change escape to excape

• Change tree to Tree

• No change should be made.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1C

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

What is the prompt?

• Many children want to become doctors, firefighters, or veterinarians when they grow up.

• Think about what you want to become when you grow up.

• Write about a job you would like to have when you become an adult. Explain why you would like to have that job.

• There is no prompt

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.8.1C

CCSS.L.K.1D

What would you brainstorm for this prompt?

• A job you would like to have as an adult and why

• Children want to be doctors and why

• Growing up and why you need a job

• Children want to be firefighters and why

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.8.1C

CCSS.L.K.1D

What does an introduction include?

• Restated topic sentence

• Just a topic sentence

• A lead and a topic sentence

• Just a lead

Tags

CCSS.W.4.2A

What does the middle of your essay do?

• Restate your topic sentence

• State the lead and topic sentences

• Write about whatever you want

• Explains your main ideas for the prompt

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D