Revising Sentences

(22) The Frio River Treetop is closer to home it is located near Leakey, Texas?

What is the correct way to write sentence 22?

• The Frio River Treetop is closer. To home, it is located near Leakey, Texas.

• The Frio River Treetop is closer to home. It is located near Leakey, Texas.

• The Frio River Treetop is closer to home as a result it is located, near Leakey, Texas.

• No change is needed.

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CCSS.L.1.2B

CCSS.L.5.2

(10) One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle and called a bubble ring it happens to be the perfect sea toy.

What is the correct way to write sentence 10?

• One kind of an air bubble is shaped like a circle and called a bubble ring. Happening to be the perfect sea toy.

• One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle, and called a bubble ring. Then it happens to be the perfect sea toy.

• One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle, called a bubble ring it happens to be the perfect sea toy.

• One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle. It is called a bubble ring, and it happens to be the perfect sea toy.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

(6) This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country it looks pink because it is made from sunset-red granite.

What is the correct way to write sentence 6?

• This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country. And looks pink because it is made from sunset-red granite.

• This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country and looks pink that is because it is made from sunset-red granite.

• This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country, and it looks pink. Because it is made from sunset-red granite.

• This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country. It looks pink because it is made from sunset-red granite.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

(34) I would try my hardest to gather plenty of food, I wanted to become the very best worker ant our colony has ever had!

What is the correct way to write sentence 34?

• I would try my hardest to gather plenty of food because I wanted to become the very best work ant. That our colony has ever had!

• I would try my hardest to gather plenty of food because I wanted to become. The very best worker ant our colony has ever had!

• I would try my hardest to gather plenty of food. Wanting to become the very best worker ant our colony has ever had!

• I would try my hardest to gather plenty of food. I wanted to become the very best worker ant our colony has ever had!

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

(33) The shrimp swam after the clown fish, the coral cheered, waving its arms wildly.

What is the correct way to write sentence 33?

• The shrimp swam after the clown fish. The coral cheering and waving its arms wildly.

• The shrimp swam after the clown fish, and the coral cheered, it waved its arms wildly.

• The shrimp swam after the clown fish, and the coral cheered. Waving its arms wildly.

• The shrimp swam after the clown fish. The coral cheered, waving its arms wildly.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

(13) I wanted to take it off, my dad kept telling me that I would get used to it.

What is the correct way to write sentence 13?

• I wanted to take it off my dad. Who kept telling me that I would get used to it.

• I wanted to take it off, and my dad kept telling me. That I would get used to it.

• I wanted to take it off, but my dad kept telling me that I would get used to it.

• The sentence is written correctly in the paper.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

(22) Many people say that a big house is better, but there are other people all over the world who disagree.

What is the correct way to write sentence 22?

• Many people say that a big house is better, there are other people all over the world who disagree.

• While many people say that a big house is better. There are other people all over the world who disagree.

• Many people say that a big house is better, but there are other people all over the world. Who disagree.

• Sentence 22 is written correctly in the paper.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

(14) However, we put food in my cat’s bowl, she eats whenever she’s hungry.

What is the correct way to write sentence 14?

• However, we put food in my cat’s bowl, and she eats. Whenever she’s hungry.

• However, when we put food in my cat’s bowl. She eats whenever she’s hungry.

• However, we put food in my cat’s bowl. And eats whenever she’s hungry.

• However, we put food in my cat’s bowl, and she eats whenever she’s hungry.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

(20) Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface, we would have a big mess to clean up then.

What is the correct way to write sentence 20?

• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface. And have a big mess to clean up.

• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface then we would have a big mess to clean up.

• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface, and we would have a big mess to clean up.

• The sentence is written correctly in the paper.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

(17) And was even thinking about running up the next stalk of grass.

What is the correct way to write sentence 17?

• And was even thinking about running. Up the next stalk of grass.

• I was even thinking about running up the next stalk of grass.

• I was even thinking about running, I would go up the next stalk of grass.

• Sentence 17 is written correctly in the story.

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CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.5.3A