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Playing video games is a much better activity than reading books because I can be more creative and be very entertained.

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For example, when playing World of Wonder I get to decide on every aspect of my avatar (gaming character).

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By making my own choices, my mind is forced to make decisions and try new things.

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In books an author makes all the decisions, but in games I am in control.

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In addition, World of Wonder allows me to work in teams with people of all ages from all over the world.

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Reading a book can be a lonely activity, but I like working with others and learning from their ideas.

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I find it much more entertaining to collaborate with others than to sit alone with a dusty book.

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Of course, reading well is important and can help me grow, but given a choice I would rather grab a magical axe and set out on an adventure of my own creation than flip the dry pages of a book that cannot be changed.

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