Details and Organization

What sentence in the fourth paragraph (sentences 17-22) should be deleted?

• Sentence 18

• Sentence 19

• Sentence 20

• Sentence 21

Randy would like to add the following sentence to the fourth paragraph.

People hoped that their efforts to improve daily life at home would help the soldiers achieve victory in the war.

Where is the best place to insert this sentence.

• After sentence 11

• After sentence 12

• After sentence 13

• After sentence 14

Which sentence in the second paragraph should be deleted?

• Sentence 7

• Sentence 8

• Sentence 9

• Sentence 10

Jill would like to add the following sentence to the third paragraph.

My mom says her cookies could never be as delicious as Grandma's.

Where is the BEST place to insert this sentence?

• After sentence 11

• After sentence 14

• After sentence 17

• This sentence should not be added to the paragraph.

Which sentence in the fifth paragraph should be deleted?

• Sentence 20

• Sentence 21

• Sentence 22

• Sentence 23

Which sentence in the fifth paragraph should be deleted?

• Sentence 16

• Sentence 17

• Sentence 18

• Sentence 19

Brandon would like to add the following sentence to the third paragraph (sentences 9-25).

Gathering data from tracking collars, scientists have learned about the behaviors of many endangered species, such as polar bears.

Where is the BEST place to insert this sentence?

• At the beginning of the paragraph

• After sentence 11

• At the end of the paragraph

• This sentence should not be added to the paragraph.

Rosa would like to add the following sentence to the second paragraph (sentences 4-9).

Reading fiction today may help kids build the imaginations they need to be successful tomorrow.

Where is the BEST place to insert this sentence?

• At the beginning of the paragraph

• After sentence 4

• After sentence 5

• After sentence 7

Melanie would like to add the following sentence to the second paragraph (sentences 5-8).

More than 400 different types of chemicals are used in farming.

Where is the BEST place to insert this sentence?

• After sentence 5

• After sentence 6

• After sentence 7

• After sentence 8

Which sentence in the third paragraph should be deleted?

• Sentence 11

• Sentence 12

• Sentence 15

• Sentence 16