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Many people believe that the ray's of her crown represent the seven oceans and seven continents of the world.

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As Zoey draged herself up the shore and away from the ocean, she felt the dry and grainy sand on her flippers.

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It is fun to clap you're hands in this room and hear the echo that the ceiling produces.

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• Change produces to produce

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Jonathon, Mark, and David was climbing the giant oak tree when a thunderstorm rolled in.

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• Change was to were

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“What do I do first,” I asked eagerly.

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“Make sure that you don’t leave any lumps,” Dad instructed while I stired the mixture.

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• Change stired to stirred

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While I scraped my impatience off the griddle, Dad showed me what he meant by “solid bubbles” and then taught me how to flip the pancakes correct.

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I learned that cooking takes more patience and attention to detail then I had ever dreamed!

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This unusual creature has large fins on it's head.

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Hannah enjoys the vibrant colors of the beautiful flowers that bloom in the Spring.

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