Run-on Sentences

My dog is fluffy he has a lot of hair.

• My dog is fluffy, he has a lot of hair.

• My dog is fluffy. He has a lot of hair.

I love Language Arts class we have so much fun!

• I love Language Arts class, we have so much fun.

• I love Language Arts class. We have so much fun.

Ms. Cheline was my PE teacher now she is my Language Arts teacher

• Ms. Cheline was my PE teacher, but now she is my Language Arts teacher.

• Ms. Cheline was my PE teacher now. She is my Language Arts teacher.

I love to eat candy the sour ones are my favorite.

• I love to eat. Candy the sour ones are my favorite.

• I love to eat candy. The sour ones are my favorite.

I go to the park after school I see a lot of friends there.

• I go to the park after school, and I see a lot of friends there.

• I go to the park, after school I see a lot of friends there.

My family likes to go on vacation our favorite place is the beach.

• My family likes to go. On vacation our favorite place is the beach.

• My family likes to go on vacation. Our favorite place is the beach.

I only watch TV on the weekends I love cartoons.

• I only watch TV, on the weekends I love cartoons.

• I only watch TV on the weekends. I love cartoons.

I want to be an Astronaut I will fly to the moon.

• I want to be an Astronaut. I will fly to the moon.

• I want to be an Astronaut I will fly, to the moon.

My favorite food is pasta I will cook it tonight.

• My favorite food is pasta, and I will cook it tonight.

• My favorite food is pasta I will cook it, tonight.

I played in the waves at the beach I got very wet.

• I played in the waves, at the beach I got very wet.

• I played in the waves at the beach, and I got very wet.