Mrs. S. Lee-English Editing Review

I don’t barely have enough money to by my own movie ticket.

• Correct as is.....

• I barely have enough money to buy my own movie ticket.

• I don’t barely have enough money to by my own movie ticket.

• I dont' have enough money to by my own movie ticket.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.4.1C

George the youngest of the brothers is trying our for the Dallas Cowboys football team.

• George the youngest of, the brothers is trying out, for the Dallas Cowboys football team.

• George the youngest of, the brothers is trying out, for the Dallas cowboys football team.

• George, the youngest of the brothers, is trying out for the Dallas Cowboys football team.

• George, the youngest of the brother's, is trying out for the Dallas Cowboys Football Team.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

My daughter is upset because the medal she recieved was lost in the girls locker room.

• My daughter is upset because the medal she received was lost in the girls' locker room.

• My daughter is upset because the metal she recieved was lost in the girl's locker room.

• My daughter is upset, because the medal she received was lost in the girl's locker room.

• Correct as it is

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

I recieved all the classes I wanted except algebra and Spanish.

• I recieved all the classes I wanted except Algebra and Spanish.

• I received all the classes I wanted except algebra and Spanish.

• I received all the classes I wanted except Algebra and Spanish.

• I recieved all the classes I wanted except Algebra and Spanish.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

On September 1 2022 I purchased my first pair of nike shoes.

• Correct as it Is

• On September 1, 2022. I purchased my first pair of nike shoes.

• On September 1, 2022, I purchased my first pair of Nike shoes.

• On September 1 2022, I purchased my first pair of Nike shoes.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.2B

CCSS.L.3.2B

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.2A

Its to in the morning and i still cannot not go to sleep?

• It's to in the morning and i still cannot go to sleep.

• It's two in the morning and I steal cannot not go to sleep.

• Correct as it is

• It's two in the morning and I still cannot go to sleep.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

Mrs. Ashton the technology director will give students a lesson about online safety.

• Mrs. Ashton, the technology director, will give students a lesson about online safety.

• Correct as is..

• Mrs. Ashton the technology, director will give students, a lesson about online safety.

• Mrs. Ashton the, technology director, will give students a lesson about online safety.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

I am so overwhelmed taking algebra I civics and advanced english.  I don’t hardly have enough time to too play sports this year.

• Correct as is...

• I am so overwhelmed taking Algebra I, civics and advanced English.  I don’t hardly have enough time too play sports this year.

• I am so overwhelmed taking algebra I, civics, and advanced english.  I hardly have enough time to play sports this year.

• I am so overwhelmed taking Algebra I, civics, and advanced English.  I hardly have enough time to play sports this year.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

I want to live somewhere south of Miami.

• I want to live somewhere South of Miami.

• I want two live somewhere south of miami.

• I want two live somewhere South of Miami.

• I want to live somewhere south of Miami.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

While reading the poem a rose that grew from concrete, I was startled by the dog chasing it's own tail.

• While reading the poem a rose that grew from concrete, I was startled by the dog chasing it's own tail.

• While reading the poem "A Rose that Grew from Concrete", I was startled by the dog chasing its own tail.

• While reading the poem a rose that grew from concrete, I was startled by the dog chasing its own tale.

• Correct as it is...

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D