Mrs. S. Lee-English Editing Review

I don’t barely have enough money to by my own movie ticket.

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• I barely have enough money to buy my own movie ticket.

• I don’t barely have enough money to by my own movie ticket.

• I dont' have enough money to by my own movie ticket.

George the youngest of the brothers is trying our for the Dallas Cowboys football team.

• George the youngest of, the brothers is trying out, for the Dallas Cowboys football team.

• George the youngest of, the brothers is trying out, for the Dallas cowboys football team.

• George, the youngest of the brothers, is trying out for the Dallas Cowboys football team.

• George, the youngest of the brother's, is trying out for the Dallas Cowboys Football Team.

My daughter is upset because the medal she recieved was lost in the girls locker room.

• My daughter is upset because the medal she received was lost in the girls' locker room.

• My daughter is upset because the metal she recieved was lost in the girl's locker room.

• My daughter is upset, because the medal she received was lost in the girl's locker room.

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I recieved all the classes I wanted except algebra and Spanish.

• I recieved all the classes I wanted except Algebra and Spanish.

• I received all the classes I wanted except algebra and Spanish.

• I received all the classes I wanted except Algebra and Spanish.

• I recieved all the classes I wanted except Algebra and Spanish.

On September 1 2022 I purchased my first pair of nike shoes.

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• On September 1, 2022. I purchased my first pair of nike shoes.

• On September 1, 2022, I purchased my first pair of Nike shoes.

• On September 1 2022, I purchased my first pair of Nike shoes.

Its to in the morning and i still cannot not go to sleep?

• It's to in the morning and i still cannot go to sleep.

• It's two in the morning and I steal cannot not go to sleep.

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• It's two in the morning and I still cannot go to sleep.

Mrs. Ashton the technology director will give students a lesson about online safety.

• Mrs. Ashton, the technology director, will give students a lesson about online safety.

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• Mrs. Ashton the technology, director will give students, a lesson about online safety.

• Mrs. Ashton the, technology director, will give students a lesson about online safety.

I am so overwhelmed taking algebra I civics and advanced english.  I don’t hardly have enough time to too play sports this year.

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• I am so overwhelmed taking Algebra I, civics and advanced English.  I don’t hardly have enough time too play sports this year.

• I am so overwhelmed taking algebra I, civics, and advanced english.  I hardly have enough time to play sports this year.

• I am so overwhelmed taking Algebra I, civics, and advanced English.  I hardly have enough time to play sports this year.

I want to live somewhere south of Miami.

• I want to live somewhere South of Miami.

• I want two live somewhere south of miami.

• I want two live somewhere South of Miami.

• I want to live somewhere south of Miami.

While reading the poem a rose that grew from concrete, I was startled by the dog chasing it's own tail.

• While reading the poem a rose that grew from concrete, I was startled by the dog chasing it's own tail.

• While reading the poem "A Rose that Grew from Concrete", I was startled by the dog chasing its own tail.

• While reading the poem a rose that grew from concrete, I was startled by the dog chasing its own tale.

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