Cat Cafes (Revising and Editing)

What change should be made in sentence 2?

• Change there to their

• Change isn't to is

• Change closely to closer

• Change them to it

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 8?

• Change is to are

• Change made to making

• Change especially to especialy

• No change needs to be made in sentence 8.

What is the correct way to write sentence 11?

• Cat cafes are exactly what the name suggests, being coffee shops that feature real, live cats.

• Cat cafes are exactly what the name suggests: coffee shops that feature real, live cats.

• Cat cafes are exactly what the name suggests, and coffee shops that feature real, live cats.

• Cat cafes are exactly what the name suggests. Coffee shops that feature real, live cats.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 16?

• Change cat section to Cat Section

• Change customers to customer's

• Change friskyness to friskiness

• Sentence 16 should not be changed.

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 18?

• Change the comma to a colon

• Insert never before allow

• Change your to their

• No change needs to be made in this sentence.

What is the correct way to write sentences 23 and 24? (Hint - Combine these two sentences into one compound sentence using a FANBOY and a comma.)

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 27?

• Change lived to live

• Insert a comma after room

• Change properly to proper

• No change is needed in sentence 27.

How should sentence 32 be changed?

• Change parlour to Parlour

• Change advance to advanced

• Change large to larger

• Sentence 32 should not be changed.

What change should be made in sentence 33?

• Insert a comma after London

• Change started to start

• Insert quotation marks before says

• Change founder to Founder