Grammar - Wordy & Language

Which of the following sentences breaks the rule of no personal pronouns when using formal language?

• In my opinion, all schools should start at 8 am.

• Students should have the opportunity to listen to music while working.

• You should like this novel.

• Can't students arrive late to school?

Which of the following sentences breaks the rule of no second person pronouns when writing in formal language?

• Harry is the hero of the novel.

• I think Hermione should be the real hero.

• Fortnite is my favorite game to play at home.

• You should play Fortnite with Jim tonight and beat him!

Which of the following sentences breaks the rule of no contractions when writing using formal language.

• You are the best Fortnite player!

• I think Fortnite is a pointless game.

• Could you possibly tell my mom she shouldn't come?

• Tell me the answer to my question!

Which of the following sentences breaks the rule of no vague words when writing using formal language?

• The dog walked over to the fire hydrant and peed on it's surface.

• The girl wanted to tell the boy she was pretty confused about his actions.

• The best day of the week, in my opinion, is Saturday.

• Can't you go work in another room?

Which of the following sentences is using redundant words or phrases?

• We will collaborate together on Friday.

• Get rid of that freezer burn in the fridge.

• The common ailment of a cold is a cough.

• Pay attention to the speaker.

Which of the following uses unnecessary phrases like opinions?

• What is the solution?

• Please tell your mother that we are watching a movie next class.

• When students turn in work, to be honest, it's annoying.

• The importance of time management is emphasized in this book.

Which of the following uses extra word phrases that start with "that?"

• The theme of the story was that there are always two sides to the story.

• The society is led by a man that owns land.

• That book is the best I've ever read.

• What time is the appointment?

Which of the following uses active voice, not passive voice?

• An oppressive parent is promoted by villains.

• The speech was given by Martha.

• A car was passed by the bus as the children waved.

• The school promotes good culture among the students.

Which of the following sentences uses FORMAL/ACADEMIC LANGUAGE?

• We all are great students!

• The parade is planned for Friday after school.

• When I think about school, it makes me cringe.

• When others plan events, it's more enjoyable.

Which of the following sentences does not use redundant, unnecessary, and wordy phrases?

• The campaign was promoted by Walmart.

• School should have at least two snow days if you think about it.

• The teacher was the worst the students had ever had.

• Some common similarities among students are: playing Fortnite, videogames, and friends.