Editing and Revising 5th

Chicago was excited about Beacheys remarkable achievements. He had been the first man to fly at Niagara Falls and the first to successfully pull out of a tailspin. He was the first American to fly upside down and to loop the loop. He was the only man to have flown a plane indoors, through a huge exhibition building at this very Panama-Pacific fair.

• Chicago was excited about Beachey’s remarkable achievements.

• Chicago was excited about Beacheys’ remarkable achievements.

• Chicago was excited about Beacheyes remarkable achievements.

• Chicago was excited about Beacheys remarkable achievements.

Edit the sentences by selecting the sentence that does not use verb tense correctly.

• He was the only man to have flown a plane indoors, through a huge exhibition building at this very Panama-Pacific fair.

• He flew the Barrel Roll, the Corkscrew Twist, and every other trick that had ever been attempting.

• And one trick that hadn't: a trick that no other flyer could do, although more than a dozen had tried.

Edit the sentences by selecting the sentence that does not use verb tense correctly.

• He was the only man to have flown a plane indoors, through a huge exhibition building at this very Panama-Pacific fair.

• He flew the Barrel Roll, the Corkscrew Twist, and every other trick that had ever been attempting.

• And one trick that hadn't: a trick that no other flyer could do, although more than a dozen had tried.

Liam wants his mother to know

that she doesn’t have to worry

about Ben’s care.

• Change mother to Mother

• Change wants to want

• Change worry to worried

• Make no change

Mrs. Blackwell became loved and

admired all over the world.

• Change Mrs. to mrs.

• Change world to World

• Change the period to a question

  mark

• Make no change

On the first day of summer vacation, giselle decided to go to

the pool.

• Change pool to Pool

• Change giselle to giselle

• Change the period to a ques-

  tion mark

• Change summer to Summer

Scientist have found that sharks

but wolves hunt in packs.

• Change but to and

• Change but to yet

• Change but to nor

• Make no change

We seen rain outside the window this morning.

• Change seen to sees

• Change seen to see

• Change seen to saw

• Change seen to sawl

What word would correctly replace themselfs in the following sentence?

They kept all the cookies to themselfs.

Correctly rewrite the following sentence .

We flew to hawaii over the break.