Identify the crimes of verbosity

Identify the crime of verbosity in this sentence:

I decided to create a real and authentic learning environment because all students in a diverse cohort benefit from inter-cultural communication training (Proctor & Arkoudis, 2017) (V3).

• Dummy subject

• Over-nominalisation

• Thoughtless adjective pairs

Identify the crime of verbosity in this sentence:

My past experience of the project management course showed me that not all students are able to manage groupwork effectively.

• Redundancy

• Wordy phrase

• Cliche

Identify the crime of verbosity in this sentence:

In my observation, I have seen they have a tendency to feel overwhelmed during peer feedback sessions (K2).

• Redundancy

• Wordy phrase

• Over-nominalisation.

Identify the crime of verbosity in this sentence:

This has been a challenging learning journey, but I now understand the need to engage students from the outset (V2).

• Redundancy

• Cliche

• Over-nominalisation.

Identify the crime of verbosity in this sentence:

There is a need for scaffolding when introducing students to new tools such as Feedback Fruits (K2).

• Wordy phrase

• Cliche

• Dummy subject

Identify the crime of verbosity in this sentence:

On reflection, I think the low participation rate may have been due to the fact that the students were off-campus during the practicum (K3, V4).

• Wordy phrase

• Redundancy

• Dummy subject