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What is the MOST effective way to revise sentence 19?

• I picked up a stick and placed it in the water.

• I picked up and placed it in the water, a stick.

• I picked up a stick in the water but placed it.

• I picked up in the water a stick, and I placed it.

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3.11C

Marshall needs to replace the word 'much' in sentence 28. Select the BEST word for Marshall to use in this sentence. It was too ​ (a)   to flow with the water.

• heavy
• light
• dark
• unicorn

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3.11C

What is the correct way to write sentence 3?

• Some are on vacation, and some are at day camp.

• Some are on vacation. With some at day camp.

• Some being on vacation and some being at day camp.

• Some are on vacation, and some are. At day camp.

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3.11D.i

What change needs to be made in sentence 4?

• Change families to familys

• Change are celebrating to is celebrating

• Change fourth to Fourth

• Delete the period

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3.11D.ix

Which sentence can BEST replace sentence 5 to improve the introduction to this paper?

• I don't usually pay much attention to Stella's excitement, but sometimes my brother does.

• Last week Mom bought Stella a new book, and she was so excited to read it by herself.

• Stella gets excited every afternoon, and it is fun to watch her jump around the hosue.

• She already had her rain boots on and was waiting excitedly for Mom to take us outside.

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3.11B.i

Match the following sentences with the correct punctuation.

• Choose the sentence with the correct punctuation for a declarative sentence.

• The cat is black.

• Choose the sentence with the correct punctuation for a interrogative sentence.

• The cat is black!

• Choose the sentence with the correct punctuation for an incomplete sentence.

• The cat is black?

• Choose the sentence with the correct punctuation for an exclamatory sentence.

• The cat is black

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CCSS.L.1.2B

CCSS.L.4.3B

CCSS.L.K.2B

Cole has made an error in sentence 8. Select the response that corrects this error. "My mom tried to cheer me up by (a)   a stack of pancakes."

• making
• baking
• eating

• buying

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3.2B.vii

What is the correct spelling of the word?

• Recieve

• Receive

• Recievee

• Receve

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CCSS.L.1.1C

CCSS.L.2.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

Sentence 9 contains an error. Select the response that corrects the error. Then suddenly, around 10:00 A.M., I

(a)   the doorbell ring.

• heard
• hear

• hears

• hearing

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3.11D.ii

What change needs to be made in sentence 2?

• Change On to In

• Change my to our

• Change is usually doing to are usually doing

• Change other to other

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3.11D.i