9. Sentence 15 includes repeated information. Which revision MOST improves sentence 15?

Once the space is chosen, the school community can gather what is needed for the lab.

Once the space is chosen, the school community can gather lab items and materials there.

Once the space is chosen and set aside, the school community can gather lab materials for our lab.

Once and after the space is chosen, the community can work to gather lab materials.

11. Claudia wants to improve the conclusion of her letter. Which sentence should replace sentence 24 to bring her letter to a more effective close?

In just a short time, students could begin using our new lab, but we have to create it first.

Students will be able to enjoy science if they have their own science lab.

Students can be proud that they accomplished something important.

Our school might become a leader in improving science education for students at other schools.

2. What is the correct way to write sentence 5?

Over thirty sculptures that we could admire were displayed outdoors.

Over thirty sculptures that we could admire being displayed outdoors.

Over thirty sculptures that we could admire had displayed outdoors.

Over thirty sculptures that we could admire displaying outdoors.

5. What change should be made in sentence 4?

Insert quotation marks before Speak

8. Which sentence should replace sentence 5 to provide a more effective claim at the end of the introductory paragraph?

Students and teachers should can work together to create a science lab.

Students everywhere enjoy doing their own science experiments.

Teachers want their students to do experiments in the safest place possible.

Some classrooms are too small to serve as a science lab.

10. What is the MOST effective way to combine sentences 17 and 18?

There are dozens of large tables in the cafeteria, but the lab would only need about eight of them.

Because there are dozens of large tables in the cafeteria, only about eight of them would be needed by the lab.

Where there are dozens of large tables is in the cafeteria, the lab would only need about eight of them

There are dozens of large tables in the cafeteria, only about eight of them would be needed by the lab.

5th Grade Revising & Editing Quiz

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English

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5th Grade

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Practice Problem

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Hard

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CCSS

L.3.1H, L.3.1A, L.4.2C

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1.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

1. What is the correct way to write sentence 2?

I did not think a field trip to an outdoor museum would be interesting or I was wrong.

I did not think a field trip to an outdoor museum would be interesting, since I was wrong.

I did not think a field trip to an outdoor museum would be interesting because I was wrong.

I did not think a field trip to an outdoor museum would be interesting, but I was wrong.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

2.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

2. What change should be made in sentence 4?

Change classmates to classmate's

Change me to I

Change got to gets

Change wander to wunder

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

3.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

3. What change should be made in sentence 7?

Change asked to asks

Change picture to pictures

Change favorit to favorite

Change arrived to arrive

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1B

CCSS.L.3.1B

CCSS.L.K.1C

4.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

4. What change should be made in sentence 3?

Change It to They

Change weather to whether

Delete the comma after predictions

Change calendar to calendar

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

5.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

5. What change should be made in sentence 6?

Change However to Meanwhile

Change believed to believe

Change usefuller to more useful

Change than to then

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1G

6.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

6. What change should be made in sentence 8?

Change Even to Evan

Change french to French

Change of to with

Change book to books

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

7.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

7. What is the MOST effective way for Claudia to write sentence 1?

Many students enjoy learning when activities are involved.

If activities involve learning, many students enjoy doing them.

When many students enjoy learning, activities are involved.

Much of the learning that students enjoy involves activities.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

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5th Grade Revising & Editing Quiz

22 questions

1. What is the correct way to write sentence 2?

2. What change should be made in sentence 4?

3. What change should be made in sentence 7?

4. What change should be made in sentence 3?

5. What change should be made in sentence 6?

6. What change should be made in sentence 8?

7. What is the MOST effective way for Claudia to write sentence 1?

8. Claudia wants to use a stronger and more positive word to replace good in sentence 7. Which word would BEST meet Claudia’s goal?

9. Sentence 15 includes repeated information. Which revision MOST improves sentence 15?

10. Claudia left out the following sentence from her fourth paragraph (sentences 14–19): "A science lab should also have cabinets and drawers for storing materials throughout the school year." Where is the BEST place to insert this sentence?

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