Cups and Arms Revising and Editing

What is the BEST way to revise sentence 1?

(1) Being responsible means doing a lot of things.

• Being responsible means you need to do things.

• Being responsible means letting other people take care of what you need to do

• Being responsible means doing the work you need to do.

Which word would BEST replace stuff in this sentence?

(2) Responsible people take care of their stuff and make good choices.

• things

• belongings

• gifts

What change if any should be made to this sentence?

ms. berry read an exciting book to the kids in her class.

• change kids to kides

• change ms. berry to Ms. Berry

• change the . to a ?

What change should be made in sentence 2?
(2) It have a floor but no walls or roof.

• Change have to had

• Change no to know

• Change walls to wall’s

• Change roof to rouf

What change should be made in sentence 4?
(4) Than I noticed my new friend Sam walking by with his father.

• Change Than to Then

• Change friend to friends

• Change the . to ?

• Change with to at

What change‚ if any‚ should be made in sentence 9?
(9) By the end of the day‚ I had a beautiful new tree house and a new friends.

• Change of to in

• Change had to has

• Change friends to friend

• No change needed

What change should be made in sentence 2?
(2) For this reason, we should make our own outdoor center to measured the weather.

• Change reason to reasons

• Change should to shood

• Change our to your

• Change measured to measure

What change should be made in sentence 4?
(4) A best place to start would be with a thermometer and a rain gauge.

• Change best to good

• Change place to plase

• Change would be to was

• Change with to from

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 8?
(8) We would also have fun learning about the weather in our city of El paso.

• Change learning to lurning

• Change about to for

• Change El paso to El Paso

• No change is needed.

Kat wants to use a better word than keeps in sentence 2. What word should replace keeps in sentence 2?
(2) It keeps supplies, food, and clothing to people during difficult times.

• clears

• turns

• provides

• stops