Revising Sentences for Clarity
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English
4th Grade
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1.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
13. Sentences 5–7 contain repeated information. What is the BEST way to revise these sentences?
A. Hedgehogs are awake at night and sleep during the day, so we covered Charlie’s cage to help him rest.
B. Hedgehogs sleep in the day, and Charlie slept too so we covered his cage.
C. Hedgehogs sleep, and Charlie sleeps, so he needs a covering.
D. Hedgehogs are nocturnal, and nocturnal means awake at night and sleeping during the day.
2.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
14. What is the BEST way to revise sentences 4–6 to avoid repeating an idea?
A. Hedgehogs are nocturnal animals, which means they are awake at night and asleep during the day.
B. Hedgehogs are nocturnal animals who are awake at night, and nocturnal animals sleep in the day.
C. Hedgehogs are nocturnal. Nocturnal animals are awake at night. They sleep in the day.
D. Hedgehogs sleep during the day and they sleep during the day because they are nocturnal.
3.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
15. Which sentence should be removed from this paragraph?
sentence 1
sentence 7
sentence 8
sentence 9
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CCSS.RI.3.2
CCSS.RI.4.2
CCSS.RL.3.2
CCSS.RL.4.2
CCSS.RL.5.2
4.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
16. Which is the BEST way to combine sentences 5 and 6?
A. That means they are awake at night and sleep during the day.
B. That means they are awake at night and that also means they sleep during the day.
C. That means they are awake at night they sleep during the day.
D. That means they are awake at night, sleep during the day
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CCSS.L.3.1H
CCSS.L.5.1E
CCSS.L.2.1F
CCSS.L.3.1I
CCSS.L.4.2C
5.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
17. Maria wants to add a transition word to the beginning of sentence 15. Select the word that she should use.
___________ we put in a little box he could hide in to get away from light or noise during the day.
Before
Finally
Because
First
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CCSS.L.3.1H
CCSS.L.5.1E
CCSS.L.1.1G
CCSS.L.5.1A
6.
OPEN ENDED QUESTION
3 mins • 1 pt
18. Maria wants to combine sentences 23 and 24. In the space provided, write a new sentence that combines sentences 23 and 24 in a clear and effective way.
Sentence 23: He was in the closet.
Sentence 24: He was sleeping in his exercise ball!
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CCSS.L.3.1H
CCSS.L.5.1E
CCSS.L.2.1F
CCSS.L.3.1I
CCSS.L.4.2C
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