Renewable Energy Developmental Writing and Revision

Renewable Energy Developmental Writing and Revision

M6 Critical Thinking and Writing

Multiple Choice

Reading our work and making improvements is called _________________________.

• revising

• spellchecking

• close reading

• skimming

Poll

When you write an essay, do you use revision?

Please, share your own opinion. The results are hidden.

• Yes, I always do revision of my work.

• I sometime revise my writing

• I do not often revise my writing

• I do not do revision much at all

Open Ended

Write 1 sentence about wind power using the conjunction because

wind power / because

^{Take a screenshot so you can see your sentence later}

​Revise that sentence

​You could revise your because sentence into a Since sentence by swapping the clauses around.

​_____________________ because _________________.

​Since _____________, _____________________.

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​You could revise the sentence by adding an appositive:

​Wind power, a ____________ , ________ because ___________.

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​You could revise the sentence by adding a contrast using however or but.

​Wind power ______________ because ______________, but ______.

​Wind power ______________ because ______________, however __ ______.