Paraphrasing

Paraphrasing

By Yelly Andriani Barlian

What is Paraphrasing?

​Definition

Delivering one's ideas/messages by using your own words/phrases/sentences and citing the source of information.

Paraphrasing Key Points

4 Steps of Paraphrasing (Don't forget to cite the source)

1. Read the original Text to understand the message (jot down the key concepts).

2. ​Restate the original messages in your own words.

3. ​Recheck your draft, compare it with the original version. Ensure it does not remain too similar.

4. Repair your draft so that it's written down in an academic manner and it flows with the rest of the others.

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The steps (4 R) of paraphrasing are Read,

, Recheck and Repair. After finishing all of these 4 steps, you are urged to cite the source.

Tips for Paraphrasing

​4 tips:

1. Start your first sentence at a different point from the original source.

2. ​Use the synonyms

3. ​Change the form of words

4. Change the sentence structures​

​Paraphrasing Examples

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1. Start your first sentence at a different point from the original source.

​2. What synonyms do you find between these two texts?

• Foreign and domestic tourists= tourists travelled to or within the Netherlands

• Rose = experienced dramatic growth, etc

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​Original Source:

​“The number of foreign and domestic tourists in the Netherlands rose above 42 million in 2017, an increase of 9% and the sharpest growth rate since 2006, the national statistics office CBS reported on Wednesday” (DutchNews.nl, 2018).

​Paraphrased Version:

According to the national statistics office, the Netherlands experienced dramatic growth in tourist numbers in 2017. More than 42 million tourists travelled to or within the Netherlands that year, representing a 9% increase—the steepest in 12 years (DutchNews.nl, 2018).​

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(no. 3 &4) The change in the form of the word and sentence structure

“technology outpaces what users, regulators or even its creators expected”

The sentence structure might be changed to be:

“the

of creators, regulators and users have been rapidly eclipsed by technology“

How to cite?

​in-text citation

​Citation style	​Rules	​Examples
​APA	​List the author's surname, year and the page number. Include a comma after the author's name and date, as well as a "p." before a single number and a "pp." before multiple page numbers.	​(Mandela,1994, p.1)
​MLA	​List the author's name and page number(s). No commas are necessary.	​(Mandela 1)
​Chicago	​List the author's name, year, and the page number. Include a comma between the date and page number.	​(Mandela 1994, 1)

​Source: https://www.scribbr.com/citing-sources/in-text-citation-styles/

Multiple Choice

Which of the following is the APA citation style?

• (Bryson 2003, 2)

• (Bryson 2)

• (Bryson, 2003, p. 2)

• (Bryson 2003, p. 2)

Open Ended

Change this original text to paraphrased version:

"A portfolio can be defined as a focused collection of pieces of visual art and design, often accompanied by reflective and explanatory written data."

(Blaiki et al, 2004)