EOC Review Unit

Open Ended

"What makes an argument strong?"

Write down one element (e.g., clear claim, evidence, or counterclaim).

Be prepared to share with a partner.

Multiple Choice

What should you focus on regarding the claim during a peer review?

• Is the claim clear and focused?

• Is the claim entertaining?

• Is the claim humorous?

• Is the claim lengthy?

Multiple Choice

What is important about evidence in a peer review?

• Is there evidence that is colorful?

• Is there evidence that is relevant and strong?

• Is there evidence that is mysterious?

• Is there evidence that is fictional?

Multiple Choice

What should be checked about the organization of an essay during peer review?

• Does the essay have colorful illustrations?

• Does the essay flow logically with effective transitions?

• Does the essay have a catchy title?

• Does the essay include jokes?

Multiple Choice

What should be considered about counterclaims in a peer review?

• Are opposing views ignored?

• Are opposing views addressed and refuted effectively?

• Are opposing views celebrated?

• Are opposing views exaggerated?

Multiple Choice

What is the role of the conclusion in a peer review?

• Does it introduce new claims?

• Does it restate the claim and summarize key points?

• Does it provide a joke?

• Does it confuse the reader?

Multiple Choice

Which of the following is a constructive feedback sentence starter for a claim?

• This evidence is strong because...

• Consider clarifying your claim by...

• Consider adding a transition between...

• You could add more evidence to support...

Multiple Choice

What is a suggested feedback sentence starter for evidence?

• Your claim is clear because...

• Consider adding a transition between...

• This evidence is strong because...

• Your ideas flow well, especially when you said...

Multiple Choice

Which feedback sentence starter is related to organization?

• Your claim is clear because...

• Consider clarifying your claim by...

• Consider adding a transition between...

• This evidence is strong because...

Multiple Choice

Identify a feedback sentence starter that suggests adding more evidence.

• You could add more evidence to support...

• Your ideas flow well, especially when you said...

• Your claim is clear because...

• Consider clarifying your claim by...

Multiple Choice

Which sentence starter would you use to compliment the flow of ideas?

• Consider clarifying your claim by...

• Your ideas flow well, especially when you said...

• This evidence is strong because...

• You could add more evidence to support...

Open Ended

Reflect on today’s lesson:

• What is one specific revision you will make to your essay?

• What part of your essay are you most confident about, and why?

• How did peer review help you improve your writing?

Multiple Choice

What is the main purpose of a thesis statement in an essay?

• To provide a summary of the essay

• To introduce the essay's main idea and structure

• To list all the sources used in the essay

• To conclude the essay

Multiple Choice

Which of the following is a characteristic of a strong thesis statement for the task mentioned?

• It includes a detailed biography of Shackleton

• It lists all of Shackleton's expeditions

• It clearly identifies Shackleton’s adventures and achievements

• It provides a timeline of Shackleton's life

Multiple Choice

What should you identify when writing your thesis according to the document?

• Key ideas

• Personal opinions

• Historical dates

• Literary quotes

Multiple Choice

How can you make your thesis statement more specific?

• Use complex vocabulary

• Combine challenges and successes into one statement

• Include more examples

• Write in a poetic style

Multiple Choice

What is the purpose of a topic sentence in a body paragraph?

• To introduce the main idea of the paragraph.

• To provide evidence for the thesis.

• To conclude the paragraph.

• To summarize the entire essay.

Multiple Choice

Which of the following is an example of evidence used in a body paragraph?

• Shackleton's resilience was evident in the face of adversity during the Endurance expedition.

• His ship became frozen on an ice floe, forcing him and his crew into a harrowing journey.

• Explain how this shows leadership and problem-solving.

• Discuss Shackleton's ability to keep his team focused and safe.

Multiple Choice

What is one way to integrate evidence from multiple passages?

• Use only direct quotes from one passage.

• Use direct quotes and paraphrased evidence from both passages.

• Paraphrase evidence from one passage only.

• Cite only one source.

Multiple Choice

What does citing both sources in an analysis help to show?

• Understanding of a single perspective.

• Understanding of multiple perspectives.

• Lack of evidence.

• Bias towards one source.

Open Ended

Reflect: What is one thing you learned about writing a strong body paragraph today?

Poll

Score Focus and Organization for Anchor Paper 1

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