Pay it Forward

Derrick wants to further develop the central idea of this paper by adding a detail after sentence 3. Which of these sentences could BEST follow and support sentence 3?

• Pay it forward today if you have an opportunity to do this.

• That means they're doing something nice by helping another person who may be in need.

• This is different and not the same as paying someone back.

• I had a friend who helped me when I had to clean out my garage.

Derrick has not used the most effective transition at the beginning of sentence 10. Derrick should change As a result to-

• To conclude

• For example

• Instead

• In other words

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 19?

• In 2003 the customers set a record in Connecticut, and it was at a drive-through coffee shop, which was there.

• In 2003 the customers at a drive-through coffee shop in Connecticut set a record.

• In 2003, at a drive-through coffee shop, the customers set a record it was in Connecticut.

• In 2003 there were customers at a drive-through coffee shop in Connecticut that set a record at the shop.

Derrick's paper ends abruptly. Which sentence can be added to the end of this paper to close it more effectively?

• It's nice!

• I sure would!

• Say thanks!

• Pay it forward!