Bath Time Revise and Edit

(4) Water will fly. (5) Suds of soap will abound since you must scrub your canine to remove dirt.

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 4 and 5?

• Water will fly and suds of soap will abound since you must scrub your canine to remove dirt.

• Water will fly, and suds of soap will abound since you must scrub your canine to remove dirt.

• Water will fly, suds of soap will abound since you must scrub your canine to remove dirt.

• Water will fly, so suds of soap will abound since you must scrub your canine to remove dirt.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

(6) This task may create a mess. (7) It is necessary to ensure your precious pooch is perfectly clean.

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 6 and 7?

• This task may create a mess, but it is necessary to ensure your precious pooch is perfectly clean.

• This task may create a mess, it is necessary to ensure your precious pooch is perfectly clean.

• This task may create a mess, so it is necessary to ensure your precious pooch is perfectly clean.

• This task may create a mess, or it is necessary to ensure your precious pooch is perfectly clean.

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CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

(10) Shedding is bad for asthma. (11) A wash can help with relief for those who suffer.

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 10 and 11?

• Shedding is bad for asthma, and a wash can help with relief for those who suffer.

• Shedding is bad for asthma a wash can help with relief for those who suffer.

• Shedding is bad for asthma, a wash can help with relief for those who suffer.

• Shedding is bad for asthma, so a wash can help with relief for those who suffer.

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CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

(14) Flea bites irritate a dog. (15) Getting rid of those pests is a priority.

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 14 and 15?

• Flea bites irritate a dog, getting rid of those pests is a priority.

• Flea bites irritate a dog so getting rid of those pests is a priority.

• Flea bites irritate a dog, but getting rid of those pests is a priority.

• Flea bites irritate a dog, so getting rid of those pests is a priority.

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CCSS.RI.2.5

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

(16) Scientists suggest using a brand with oatmeal. (17) Oatmeal calms itchy skin and relieves pain.

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 16 and 17?

• Scientists suggest using a brand with oatmeal, but oatmeal calms itchy skin and relieves pain.

• Scientists suggest using a brand with oatmeal, and oatmeal calms itchy skin and relieves pain.

• Scientists suggest using a brand with oatmeal, oatmeal calms itchy skin and relieves pain.

• Scientists suggest using a brand with oatmeal, and oatmeal calms itchy skin, and oatmeal relieves pain. 

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

(18) A vet may recommend the Petguard brand. (19) It is proven to work.

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 18 and 19?

• A vet may recommend the Petguard brand but it is proven to work.

• A vet may recommend the Petguard brand it is proven to work.

• A vet may recommend the Petguard brand,but it is proven to work.

• A vet may recommend the Petguard brand because it is proven to work.

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CCSS.RI.2.5

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

(20) One other reason to bathe your pup is to condition the skin. (21) When it gets dry.

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 20 and 21?

• One other reason to bathe your pup is to condition the skin when it gets dry.

• One other reason to bathe your pup is to condition the skin, and it gets dry.

• One other reason to bathe your pup is to condition the skin, but it gets dry.

• One other reason to bathe your pup is to condition the skin ,so it gets dry.

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CCSS.RI.2.3

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

(22) A good scrub will condition the fur. (23) A good scrub will make the fur shine.

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 22 and 23?

• A good scrub will condition the fur and a good scrub will make the fur shine.

• A good scrub will condition the fur, and make the fur shine.

• A good scrub will condition the fur and make the fur shine.

• A good scrub will condition and shine.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E