Editing and Revising Tips

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 8?

• change made to maked

• change subjects to subjects'

• change taxs to taxes

• make no change

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 15?

• change asked to askt

• change fight to Fight

• insert a comma after French

• make no change

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 20?

• change declaration of independence to Declaration of Independence

• change America to American

• change would never have to would not never have

• make no change

What is the best way to combine sentences 3 and 4?

• Either tornadoes can be dangerous, or those living in Tornado Alley

  should know what to do during bad weather.

• Tornadoes can be dangerous, but those living in Tornado Alley should know what to do during bad weather.

• After tornadoes can be dangerous, those living in Tornado Alley should know what to do during bad weather.

• Tornadoes can be dangerous, so those living in Tornado Alley should know what to do during bad weather.

Eve wants to remove a sentence that does not belong in this selection. Which sentence should she remove?

• sentence 1

• sentence 6

• sentence 10

• sentence 14

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:
The father helped his children get into they're pajamas.

• Change they're to their.

• Change father to Father

• Change they're to there

• Change helped to helping

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:
After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.

• Change friends to friend's

• Insert a comma after After

• Insert a comma after shopping

• Insert a comma after store

The following sentence pair should be combined to make a better sentence. Which is the best revision? 
The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike. 

• The bicycle tire is on the bike and the bicycle tire is flat.

• The flat bicycle tire is on the bike.

• On the bike, the bicycle tire there is flat.

• The tire on the bicycle is flat.

Why do we revise and edit?

• Because it is the rules. 

• To make our writing better. 

• Because Miss Watkins says too. 

• We don't have to. 

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: The editor reviewed the article and found several errors in it.

• A) Change editor to Editor

• B) Change errors to error's

• C) Insert a comma after article

• D) Change reviewed to reviewing