How to Write a Research Paper for Kids - Episode 5: Revising

The video tutorial guides viewers through the process of revising a research paper, using a paper about bats as an example. It covers the importance of revising, starting with rereading the draft, and making changes to improve clarity and interest. The tutorial discusses various aspects of bats, including their appearance, habitat, diet, and behavior, while demonstrating how to enhance the paper with additional details and better word choices. The video concludes with a revised version of the paper, emphasizing the importance of thoughtful revision in writing.

What is the primary purpose of revising a research paper?

• To reduce the number of pages

• To improve the quality of writing

• To change the topic of the paper

• To make the writing longer

Which of the following is NOT mentioned as a place where bats can live?

• Treetops

• Caves

• Deserts

• Attics

What is the wingspan range of bats as mentioned in the video?

• 6 inches to 6 feet

• 2 inches to 4 feet

• 3 inches to 3 feet

• 1 foot to 5 feet

Which of the following is a part of a bat's diet according to the research paper?

• Leaves

• Frogs

• Fish

• Seeds

What speed can bats fly at, as mentioned in the video?

• 5 mph

• 20 mph

• 10 mph

• 15 mph